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Many men came today to look at the old empty house; I have been guarding that house for many, many years; They spent quite some time looking at and touching me; I heard them saying that the house was being demolished, And a condo building would take its place. I can't help, wondering what will become of me. I started my life as a whirly bird seed in a wild forest, And soon I grew into a young tree, one of many trees. I remember them all, spruce, balsam, fir, and birch. And some maple, like me, that was two hundred years ago. It was wonderful in the forest; I loved cradling the birds, And the squirrels and chipmunks were delightful. The seasons changed me and in winter I stood proudly, Stripped of my dress; snow and icicles on my branches. Over time, my tree friends were cut down to make space, For houses and streets, but I remained standing, waiting. Soon a lovely house was built, and I have stood over it, For one hundred years now. I have seen many people come and go, and I protected, And they liked me too. Finally, the house stood derelict. For years I have been alone with only the birds and squirrels, And sometimes cats and other creatures as companions. I love the wind in my branches in the summertime, And how the fall changes my veined lobed leaves. Changing them from emerald to red-orange, then yellow, Oh how the children like collecting them from under me, And how I adore the feel of the rain and the snow falling; I even have flowers of green, yellow, orange and red, In spring, I send millions of seeds twirling in the wind, And I pray they find their place in the earth. Do you know that my leaf is the coat of arms of Canada, And it is on the flag; I am a symbol of strength and endurance, I am the national tree. But the men approaching do not care; They do not care that I have stood for two hundred years, And although, I expect it, the first cut is agony, and I scream; I am screaming in pain as again and again they cut me. Until I am lying on the ground, dead. ______________________ August 30, 2015 Poetry/Personification/Maple Tree Copyright Protected, ID 15-702-654-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Peudonym. Submitted to the Premiere Contest, Number 8 Sponsor, A Skat Ninth Place

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Date: 8/18/2016 11:01:00 PM
A very sad ending Constance.. well written...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 8/18/2016 4:39:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. thank you for visiting my blog. With Love SKAT
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Date: 8/18/2016 4:26:00 PM
Wonderful personification Constance can't believe I've not commented on this gem before!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:39:00 PM
Nice win Broken Wings.
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:46:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write broken!
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:56:00 PM
congrats on your much deserved win this time, Constance dear.
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:46:00 AM
BW, this is so darn good. Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:55:00 AM
This is fantastic Broken Wing! As always a great write! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/26/2015 9:05:00 PM
I like how you explained this story. How it survived the initial clearing and all people it loved, and like most us, knowing when the end is near.
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Date: 8/22/2015 10:40:00 PM
wow, Constance. this is a winner for sure. Splendiforous!! and whatever was that word you made up? Awsomforous?? That too!!! Truly, you showed great caring for this beloved tree by personifying it as yourself.
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Date: 8/22/2015 7:37:00 PM
You have put heart and soul into this tree, dear Constance. So lovely and touching. I will think twice about taking down a tree on our property after this one !
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Date: 8/22/2015 6:57:00 PM
Wow, Broken...your poem brought tears to my eyes, especially in light of my town's historical tree having been cut down earlier this month. You have expressed this poor Maple Tree's emotions so well. I loved reading this. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/22/2015 1:42:00 PM
Nicely written! it's too bad a tree that old could not have been saved. The tree was a witness to much history. I like this...
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Date: 8/22/2015 8:53:00 AM
As I read, I could see an opening for the movie and the visual remained fixed until the very end....I knew you were good but I didn't know you were this good....
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Date: 8/21/2015 10:16:00 PM
This is so wonderful!! I loved it!! :D :D
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Date: 8/21/2015 9:07:00 PM
Lovely poem, BW. I love plants. We have more Red Maples then Sugar Maples down here. They have beautiful red leaves in the fall (not so much in FL, miss that).
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Date: 8/21/2015 7:19:00 PM
I'm glad to see through your words you seem to have a deep appreciation for the life of a tree which may have been on earth for hundreds of years for a single tree, hundreds of years deserves respect, a very sad ending to your poem, but filled with truth
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Date: 8/21/2015 5:59:00 PM
This is beautifully written indeed. What a nice reflective piece. I love mature trees, and sometimes they really are the focal point of a neighborhood. It's too bad we people can be so short-sighted. But hey, new condos! Easy 7.
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Date: 8/21/2015 5:55:00 PM
Wow. This is so well beautifully told. I like how you take us through the different time periods. I enjoyed! And all the best in the contest.
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Date: 8/21/2015 4:13:00 PM
rendered with such melancholia, and still beautifully written, constance... i have difficulty commenting with ads blocking this box.. ughhh!.. huggs
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