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Magical Morning

A mossy pebbled path I took, I came upon a babbling brook; Meandering around the bend, I could not see where it might end; An idle copse of shrubs and trees, Whistling in the calm, morning breeze; Boughs shrouded with lichens hang low, Dangling over the waters flow; Dainty ruffles taunting the shore, Smooth stones adorn the basin floor; Sunlight streams, a magical light, Appearing through the trees, a sprite! Date: March 30, 2022 For: Form -L – New Poetry Contest Sponsored by : Constance La France Theme: Nature Syllables verified on howmanysyllables.com Grammar and Spelling verified on P.S. checker Placed 3rd in contest

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Constance La France

Date: 4/8/2022 1:36:00 PM

Paulette, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/9/2022 6:05:00 AM

Thank you for the placement in your contest. I am enjoying your contests, addressing various forms of poetry;forms that I may have never explored. Blessings, Paulette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2022 3:15:00 PM

Congrats on your winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading the lines because it reminds me of scenes in my life. Sara

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/7/2022 5:18:00 PM

So glad you enjoyed it and that it brought up the warm memories you hold. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/5/2022 9:42:00 AM

Congrats! Lovely!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/5/2022 5:47:00 PM

Thank you Kim! :)Paulette

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/4/2022 6:51:00 AM

Vivid illustration. Congratulations!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/4/2022 5:03:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Valsa George

Date: 3/31/2022 10:20:00 PM

Indeed a magical morning ! Charting the flow of a lovely brook is always a sweet experience. Lovely entry for the contest, dear Paulette !

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/1/2022 7:39:00 AM

Dear Valsa, Thank you for your lovely comments. :)Paulette

Bill Baker

Date: 3/31/2022 5:04:00 PM

Excellent entry for the contest, Paulette. Your imagery and descriptions are enchanting. Hugs, Bill

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/1/2022 7:40:00 AM

Thank you Bill~it was a fun write. :)Paulette

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/31/2022 1:52:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery Paulette, just could picture one walking your walk with these words in our head loving its every moment. Blessings, Gordon

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/31/2022 4:39:00 PM

Thank you Gordon~a lovely walk,even if it is in my head. Blessings, Paulette

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/30/2022 3:53:00 PM

A lovely stroll dear poet, peaceful and serene, very creative

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/30/2022 4:56:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the stroll along with me. :)Paulette

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/30/2022 8:10:00 AM

I love it, Paulette. It conjures up such magical memories of a stroll. Best of luck in the contest.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/30/2022 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Milton~a fun write for Spring. :)Paulette

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/30/2022 7:41:00 AM

Paulette, your imagery is impeccable!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/30/2022 12:13:00 PM

Wow~thank you for complimentary comments. :)Paulette

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/30/2022 7:09:00 AM

Love the imagery Paulette, you take the reader on an enchanting stroll. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/30/2022 12:14:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the stroll! :)Paulette

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/30/2022 6:12:00 AM

Cool poem; enjoyed reading it -JT

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/30/2022 6:37:00 AM

Thank you J.T~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/30/2022 6:01:00 AM

How I wish yo find such a lovely place where my soul may find some peace. A lovely lay. Best for a win.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/30/2022 6:38:00 AM

Wishing you Peace dear Victor~glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette