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Love Lost

We've only just begun a life combined as one a life of love ahead together we shall spread our love to all we meet and shout it from the street What is this you say? No, not one more day? This cannot be true what they say of you, surely it's a lie There is no cure are you for sure? I cannot bear it is not fair Quite the plight eyes a fright no more fight just one thing left Death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/23/2012 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Trudy. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2012 6:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot a sad one xx
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:56:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 6/22/2012 12:37:00 PM
Wow, a powerful write of true love. The ending was unexpected and so sad. You have brought tears to my eyes. Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/22/2012 12:16:00 PM
What a roller coaster of emotions in this winning dimi hexi...I loved the flow and powerful abrupt stop at the end....Congrats, gwendolen
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Date: 6/22/2012 11:16:00 AM
Trudy~xox~ a wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day (: PD
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Date: 6/22/2012 10:50:00 AM
Trudy, I really felt your words in this poem, was this about your dad? thanks for entering and well done...David
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/22/2012 11:20:00 AM
It is actually about my husband, he's been diagnosed with an incurable lung disease, although there may be more time with medications and such, we have a long road ahead of us....hopefully VERY long ... but...yeah, it's not easy living with the diagnosis.
Date: 6/22/2012 7:48:00 AM
wow, it went right down to DEATH. What a way to do this form, Trudy. Big congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/22/2012 7:43:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem!!!!
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