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"Temptation would not shift, had to make one last parting gift" ~The Poet~ Seeping like spilled golden honey smothering the horizon, As age old marshmallow clouds surrender to flames and wizen. The molten ball of fire, sinks slowly, descending into the waiting sea. A lone bird in flight streaks across the scene in delight of being free. Ebony shadows across the sun drenched sky, signify the end of day. Moonbeams will embrace the darkened sky as night steps in to play. Distant stars begin to glow with lustrous lights crystalized in space. Captivating worship as myriads of prayers fleet to His Heavenly Grace. A joyous peace engulfs our tiny earth, as goodwill flows over the land. All affray ceases, those who fought see their weapons melt into the sand. A serene calm envelops each child, woman and man, eradicating fear. Enemies become friends, and every heart is filled with abundant cheer. Love and laughter and peace ever after when peace resumes her sway. Famine, disease, cruelty or greed, all issues of the past no longer to display. Families reunite, thoughts of war eventually fade, His word will be obeyed. Night’s resplendent curtain withdrawn to show the new day He has made.

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Date: 1/5/2024 10:16:00 AM
Hi dear friend. Yes, dreamy, almost ethereal. Lovely write Svviewen. ;) Congratulations! :)
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Date: 1/4/2024 4:10:00 PM
Dreamy, creamy, golden buttery...shall I go on? A moment of true bliss..May He rein and come soon. "Love and laughter and peace ever after when peace resumes her sway. Famine, disease, cruelty or greed, all issues of the past no longer to display. Families reunite" love the ending. Congratulations on your win!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 1/5/2024 7:10:00 AM
Not your last, I hope, luvy
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Date: 1/4/2024 7:26:00 PM
You forgot Marshmallowy! Thanks pal. Glad you liked my "sweet" verse. Catch la later.
Date: 1/4/2024 12:47:00 PM
Great rhymes and imagery.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/4/2024 7:28:00 PM
Thanks S.O.
Date: 1/2/2024 8:37:00 AM
Great poem, full of imagery and appreciated. Happy New Year.
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Date: 1/4/2024 7:28:00 PM
Thanks Victor
Date: 12/30/2023 10:53:00 AM
Wow if only this dreamy picture came to be. Very lovely!
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Date: 1/4/2024 7:27:00 PM
Maybe one day? Thanks dear Andrea.
Date: 12/29/2023 3:59:00 AM
How beautiful is this, creative imagery and descriptive wordplay as well as rhymes! I love everything about this poem especially the opening lines are so captivating.i wish and hope for a day that there wont be hatred and all that which you’ve mentioned there in your last lines. Imagine.. like john lennon said.. this is so powerful yet exquisite! Definitely leaves a poetic impression! Pleasure reading your work. Hope Christmas went well for you. Sending you light
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Date: 1/4/2024 7:35:00 PM
You make my poems sound better than I do !!!! Thanks dear Empress, when I become worldly famous will you please be my Publicity Manager? Love your kind ways, thanks Empress. :)
Date: 12/29/2023 2:16:00 AM
Hi Wen, I too love the line of weapons melting into the sand. It's a new era of peace, claimed and deserved. Enjoy the beautiful landscape and the fresh perspective. I'll keep in touch x
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Date: 12/29/2023 3:18:00 AM
:)
Date: 12/28/2023 6:25:00 PM
Oh look, a new poem. Very nice
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/29/2023 5:43:00 AM
No doubt ;)
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Date: 12/28/2023 7:21:00 PM
Make the most of it dear Tom. It's the last one evrrrrr :)

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