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Example for my Swap Quatrain Contest, Check it Out He came to see his long lost love To put together the pieces thereof As blossoms fell from off the tree His long lost love, he came to see They told him that she was not there His old flame who was so fair Disappointment left him flat She was not there, they told him that He walked away lost in thought As memories of her to him were brought He hoped to find her another day Lost in thought, he walked away She would remain forever lost As all his searches he did exhaust Within his heart he felt the pain Forever lost she would remain 6-3-2020

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Date: 6/9/2020 7:26:00 AM
Lost love can leave one feeling empty. Sometimes all that is left for us is to pick up the pieces and move on. When one door closes God always opens another. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/8/2020 12:06:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Joseph, though sad in its tone:)
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Date: 6/6/2020 9:03:00 AM
A sad poem losing the one we love... Deeply expressed.
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Date: 6/6/2020 1:39:00 AM
hello Joseph. A sad feeling to fell you've lost. Maybe he can search again another day. I'm very pleased to read your poem. Always and Forever LINDA
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Date: 6/5/2020 12:43:00 PM
I like this very much Joseph, its sad yet beautiful - always up for a challenge, and your poem has inspired me. Blessings my friend. Jennifere.
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Date: 6/4/2020 8:35:00 PM
Ah, no greater pain then losing someone without answers as to the where and why, Well written piece dear poet friend, xo
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Date: 6/4/2020 5:18:00 PM
so sad this is, and well done too, Joseph. I adore this poetry form. Can't wait to write one!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/4/2020 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, Glad you like this form..hugs
Date: 6/3/2020 8:52:00 PM
"Forever lost she would remain" So sad to think about. This is beautiful, yet emotional at the same time. ~ Brandy
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Joseph May
Date: 6/3/2020 9:37:00 PM
Thank you Brandy
Date: 6/3/2020 2:04:00 PM
Great example Joseph, wondered what a swap quatrain was, now I know. Tom
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Joseph May
Date: 6/3/2020 9:36:00 PM
Thank you Tom..
Date: 6/3/2020 1:35:00 PM
what a beautiful flow and rhyme and wow you make it look so easy but I fear it is too challenging for me but will give it a go:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 6/3/2020 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Jan, it's not that hard, glad you'll give it a go

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