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Losing My Best Friend

When you first get your dog there is a wonderful joy, like he is one of your own children. You go through a get to know each other period and a Special bond is developed, with you and him. You soon grow to love one another. He is part of the family, he is there to love you when you get home from work, and there to say goodnight before you go to bed. There is a bonding and interaction that develops affectionately between everyone in the family and your beloved dog. He is the king of the house. My brother Gus, his wife Elena, son Brandon, and daughter Briana can attest to these words. My brother decided to answer a dog ad for a Pug. When he got there he realized he had a sister and he decided to bring her along too. Not wanting to separate a brother and sister. The boy was named Jeter after the Yankees player and the girl Lucy after Lucille Ball. This is their story. Jeter and Lucy were Pugs that were inseparable. You can say that they were very attached and compatible. Everywhere Jeter went Lucy followed. One day they got loose and got in a bit of trouble. The family spent hours looking for them. They were found down the street, both with a Cheshire grin. Both were brought home and no treats for a week. That didn't last long, they begged and got their treat. If Lucy got a treat Jeter, would ask, what about me? They were quite the team, full of drama and comedy. These two spent many years enjoying each other's company. Some lovable moments and some very funny. The joy they brought to the family, will forever live on. As their beloved Jeter today Sadly moved On. Lucy was there till Jeter's final Breaths. She knew because she cried at the time of his death. She then moved and laid her head on him. With much love, whispered, "Jeter some day, I will see you Again." Gus and Elena filmed her farewell. As their Heartfelt emotions, were saddened and deeply felt. Tonight will be Lucys first night without Her brother. We pray that in time Lucy recovers... Jeter will live on in Our Hearts and minds. He will never be forgotten says: Lucy, Gus, Elena, Brandon and Briana. Michael Tor

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/9/2023 8:10:00 AM

Found this one I missed in Jan, Michael, a touching story, my friend. Animals can be just as much a part of family as people; a loss of one can be devistating to all in the family. It's been awhile, so I imagine, Lucy has recovered, and the rest of the family as well. Thank for sharing the things of your heart with us through your poetry, Michael. I hope life is going well for you. I miss your poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Michael Tor
Date: 6/13/2023 10:29:00 AM

Thank you Bill sorry for late response. Your words touched me today. You are a wonderful human being. God bless you my friend...

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/28/2023 12:52:00 PM

My condllences for this loss Michael, my best Wishes to you.' Did not read this when I wrote Below..I guess your mind is full right now May God bless and heal you.'

Michael Tor
Date: 2/18/2023 5:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Joe.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/28/2023 12:41:00 AM

you must have had some wonderful moments with them, dogs are trusting, lovable and innocent. Sad that one has to lose their partner first, and be left alone . Humans go through this same transition, it is a heartfelt lose when the lse their beloved dog. Mine was, my brown LAB (Coco) who died at 3 years old with leukemia. Keep well and save Michael.I enjoyed your happy/sad write very much. Hugs, Blessings, Jennifer. PS. Harry commented on my last poem, I don't he is unwell any more, praise God. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Michael Tor
Date: 2/18/2023 6:00:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, yes He is doing better...

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/27/2023 5:37:00 PM

Michael I sent you soup mail.'

Michael Tor
Date: 2/18/2023 6:00:00 PM

Got it Joe...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2023 2:49:00 PM

WOW!!! What an amazing write. Animals do feel/know/love. I hope Lucy is doing OK. I have had my heart ripped out more than once over my fur family member. I should not say this but I have cried more for some of them than people. I am so very sorry. Be blessed................

Michael Tor
Date: 1/26/2023 5:16:00 PM

Paula do not feel bad my Dear I have done this also. God bless you...

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/26/2023 7:38:00 AM

So moving Micheal we all can relate who know pet, yes, they do feel. I have been a mother Human to over 29 cats. Plus cared fotr dogs who were blind or unable to walk, cats and dogs seem to inter relate. Too lose one, is a lomg friending prodess. Thank you. Panagiota

Michael Tor
Date: 1/26/2023 5:16:00 PM

Thank you Pangie for your sharing of your beloved cats...

Robert Gorelick

Date: 1/25/2023 3:18:00 PM

Every bit as heart-wrenching as losing a dear friend, because there are dear friends. Condolences and chin up--Robert

Michael Tor
Date: 1/25/2023 8:35:00 PM

Thank you Robert, for your kind words. I really appreciate them... my friend...

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/23/2023 5:09:00 PM

Oh, so sad, Michael, yet somehow most come of their grief stronger than before. Harry

Michael Tor
Date: 1/24/2023 3:54:00 PM

So true Harry, Hope your feeling better my friend. Blessings your way...

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/21/2023 5:25:00 PM

Every person's heart can find a way to respond to a narrative about love for animals. In the tone of this poem, I can sense both the delight and subsequently the loss that the family felt. Michael, you've managed to lovingly communicate some treasured recollections.

Michael Tor
Date: 1/23/2023 1:12:00 PM

Thank you my friend for your kind words...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2023 10:09:00 AM

what a poignant tale of pets, Michael. A very well inspired write from you.

Michael Tor
Date: 1/23/2023 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Dear Andrea...

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/21/2023 6:44:00 AM

Michael, this is such a moving and such a heartfelt and beautiful tribute to Jeter! I have also lost a treasured furry friend and the void is palpable. I've another now and dread the day that we may not be together in this life!! Thank you for sharing!!

Michael Tor
Date: 1/23/2023 1:11:00 PM

Yes it is sad when we lose them my friend. We can not avoid the cycle of life that is why we cherish them everyday because someday we wont have that chance. Thanks Mike for stopping by...

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/21/2023 1:05:00 AM

This makes me so sad, poor sweet Lucy. This is heart wrenching. My deepest condolences to you family.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 1/25/2023 7:16:00 PM

God bless you too Michael, I'm still praying, I know the deep pain of such a loss, but Lucy's pain has to be very difficult to watch, even more heart breaking. How is she doing?

Michael Tor
Date: 1/23/2023 1:08:00 PM

Thank you Bj for the kind words. God bless you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/18/2023 6:01:00 PM

Oh, Michael, your tender portrayal of Jeter and Lucy brings tears to my eyes. Your vivid and heartfelt imagery brings me to the center of this emotional moment. Poor Lucy, my heart goes out to that cute lil pug. I'm so sorry for your family's loss of their beloved pet, Jeter. A sad yet splendid poem so beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Michael Tor
Date: 1/19/2023 12:36:00 PM

Susan your comment is so well thought and sincere. Your words touched me as always your sincerity and thoughtfulness are conveyed my Dear. Thank you so much...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/18/2023 1:46:00 PM

A story of love for pets resonates in every heart. I can hear the family's joy and ultimately sadness in the voice of this poem. Cherished memories affectionately conveyed, Michael.

Michael Tor
Date: 1/19/2023 12:35:00 PM

Vijay thank you so much for your thoughtful words my friend. The whole family appreciates them. God bless you...

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/18/2023 1:41:00 PM

This is such a deep reaching story. The loss of a pet is so hard and also for another pet who bonded. I have experienced it. Bless you all at this time! :)

Michael Tor
Date: 1/19/2023 12:34:00 PM

Thank you Heidi I really appreciate your kind words...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2023 10:39:00 AM

- I could tell a duplicate of this story, Michael ... the only difference is that they were not siblings :) - Much loved ... painful to lose - hugs

Michael Tor
Date: 1/18/2023 11:17:00 AM

I am sorry for you to have to go through the pain of a loss like this Anne-Lise but that pain we feel is reflective on the love we had for them. The cycle of Life sometimes it is difficult to deal with. Thank you Dear for your comment, hope you are happy and well. God bless you...

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/18/2023 10:17:00 AM

I am so sorry, Michael. I've lost my pup after 16 years of his love and loyalty. There's no way we can ever forget the love they bring to our lives. This must've been quite a chore for you to write. Hugs.

Michael Tor
Date: 1/18/2023 11:14:00 AM

Jenna first I am so sorry for your loss. Yes this was an emotional write for me. Thinking of my brother and his pain, his wife and children, and Lucy Jeter's sister. I did get emotional in writing this. We don't think that the puppy we have and grow to love someday will leave us and it is a chapter in our lives that hurts and forever stays with us. All animal lovers know this. Someday I believe we meet up with all our little friends up there over the rainbow in a place called Heaven. Thank you Jenna for your comforting words, thank you for stopping by...

Valsa George

Date: 1/18/2023 3:47:00 AM

Such a sweet story, though quite sad too. I feel for Lucy and your brother and family. To lose a pet that has been with us for years is like losing a member of the family. Michael, your story telling skill is once more brought to the fore.

Michael Tor
Date: 1/18/2023 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Valsa. Yes we all feel for Lucy. Her and Jeter were inseparable. Jeter before passing had a constant cough. Sometimes it was all night. My brother and sister in law had to deal with his chronic illness. It tore at their hearts for many sleepless nights. Troopers they were to comfort their beloved Jeter through all of his turmoil. The last night alive my brother and his wife Elena were up all night with Jeter comforting him. They felt like Jeter's parents and Jeter being their son. Now it is over and the healing begins for all including Lucy Jeters sister. The cycle of life is always there to remind us how precious life is whether it is a beloved animal or a human being. Thank you Valsa for your kind words. Have a lovely day...

Charles Messina

Date: 1/18/2023 3:18:00 AM

Great story, Michael. Yep, dogs immediately become part of our family. We too had two biological dogs (sisters) Shylo and Twixx...Twixx passed four years again and Shylo is still with us. I can still sense that she misses her sister as she waits, sitting on our bay window every morning looking out.

Michael Tor
Date: 1/18/2023 10:59:00 AM

...my father realized Gaston had walked off. He frantically went looking for him. He looked and saw Gaston by the Ocean cliff. What was remarkable was The shepherd was walking on the outside of him along the cliff. If it wasn't for the dog protecting him like that, my parents thought he might have fallen to the rocks below. Animals are a lot smarter than what we give them credit to be. Shylo will always remember Twixx no doubt about that Charlie.

Michael Tor
Date: 1/18/2023 10:54:00 AM

Charlie they know, they have a sense like we do when someone close to us departs. Dogs are amazing. I heard of so many stories where The owner and their dog go for a long walk in the woods and sadly the owner dies, and three, four days later that dog is right by their owner not leaving. They are so loyal and loving toward their human family. Another story I want to share with you. My brother Gaston ran of with our Golden Shepherd Tabare'. We were on vacation by the ocean. Gaston as a six year old took off with the dog...

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/18/2023 2:23:00 AM

Michael, you have a heart of gold. I always admire your writings. Even losing a pet can bring sadness. Perhaps with time, there will be another pug around.

Michael Tor
Date: 1/18/2023 10:46:00 AM

THank you Victor your words mean a lot. Yes sometimes replacing a dog you love with another has a way of lessening the pain of a loss. I believe as you Victor. I mentioned that to my brother and he replied not for a while. Time is the best remedy for healing other than Gods involvement. Hope you are well my friend...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/17/2023 7:30:00 PM

Here's to healing all around, Michael. ~ Gershon

Michael Tor
Date: 1/17/2023 8:04:00 PM

Thanks Gershon. My brother's dog Jeter passed today and I wrote this to help the family bring closer. It is such a sad day when anyone loses a pet they love. The cycle of life. Thank you for your soothing words they mean a lot.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/17/2023 6:49:00 PM

So sorry to hear that Michael, I've been through that twice now so I know how you are feeling right now. They're not just pets but members of your family. Tom

Michael Tor
Date: 1/17/2023 8:10:00 PM

They are members. That is for sure Tom. My brother was with Jeter all night long into the afternoon. He passed around Noon. Lucy his sister was there and my brother told me she started whimpering when he died. How did she know? It was exactly at the time he passed. She then went over and laid her head on him. My brother let her lay there for a little while. I have heard it said Tom that our pets are sometimes better than some humans. They love us unconditionally, and are always there for us. Thank you for your kind words Tom. My brother Gus and his wife Elena will read your comment, I am sure he will appreciate your kind words my friend...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2023 5:55:00 PM

So sad. So sorry. There is sweetness here and much familial love. ((hugs))

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/17/2023 3:28:00 PM

Michael, thank you for sharing this heartbreaking pain with all of us. I am sitting here with tears in my eyes not only for your loss but remembering Kahlua, Taffy, Snickers and Ted. Truly they steal into your heart and remain there forever even when they are not begging for treats or lobbying for diner. Blessings and prayers of comfort dear friend.

Michael Tor
Date: 1/17/2023 4:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Sam. Yes it is so sad when you lose a pet that you love. I lost mine two years ago Sam my brother Gus lost his Pug today. I wrote this for my brother his wife and two children. Jeter will be missed. Sam I am sorry for your losses it sounds like you have had wonderful pets Sam. Thank you Sam for your kind words much appreciated...

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/17/2023 2:40:00 PM

Michael, such pain in pet loss! Having lost 20 cats, I have been through the wringer. Also, took care of my daughters blind dog. Then another. I fall to pieces when they die. I wrote a long poem the day Sparky died. I understand and Know how they live on in memory. I watched all those cats take their final breath. Then pass on to Rainbow Bridge…I want to die! Warm hugs, you sensitive soul! Panagiota

Michael Tor
Date: 1/17/2023 4:21:00 PM

Thank you Dear. It is so sad when they pass. My brother spent the night with Jeter, holding him and trying to comfort him. When I talked to him he sounded devastated. His wife Elena too is very saddened along with his children. It is devastating for sure. Animal lovers know this. Thanks for stopping by Pangie hope all is well Dear...