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Little Bit

Little Bit waddles and limps downstairs at the sound of my voice. Barks at the hyperactive English Springer with all the fervor of Boris, the Russian Wolfhound, of Disney’s Lady and the Tramp fame.
the scruffy old stud with four legs close to the ground - wisdom’s on his side

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Date: 2/13/2024 11:37:00 AM
Great image of Little Bit all puffed up like a Russian Wolfhound. For we dog lovers, your poem, Kim, is a delightful joy on this winter's day. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 2/1/2024 8:42:00 AM
Seems you have an intelligent pet.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2024 7:50:00 PM
My daughter does :)
Date: 1/31/2024 10:05:00 PM
Ahhh so cute.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2024 6:14:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 1/31/2024 2:07:00 PM
Cute. You must love animals? :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 5:50:00 PM
They are fun to watch, each has their own personalities! :)
Date: 1/31/2024 11:11:00 AM
Hello Kim, your poem is cute. I enjoyed it. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/1/2024 11:28:00 AM
Hello Kim, oh, you are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 11:15:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene!
Date: 1/31/2024 9:46:00 AM
I like how your poem begins with a vivid image of Little Bit waddling and limping downstairs upon hearing the speaker's voice. This image immediately draws the reader into the scene, allowing them to visualize the playful interaction between the speaker and their pet. Lovely haiku also..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 11:15:00 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 1/31/2024 9:10:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading about your cute "Little Bit" write. Have a fun/wonderful day writing away.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 11:15:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!

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