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Lionel Messi

Horrendously explosive nimble ball juggler Athletic and Ever-Attacking game shuffler Maradona upgraded and improved version Awesomely admiring soccer surgeon Ruthless with the heart and strength of a Lion Devours the opponent with the boot of an iron

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/22/2020 4:20:00 PM

Seems like you are also a football expert, Gideon (Hebrew name?). Messi is definitely one of the very best; he makes good use of the talents he was endowed and blessed with. ~ Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2020 4:39:00 PM

boot of iron, such a cool phrase for defining his leg!! I know nothing of this sport or the players but I really like how you wrote this.

Gideon Foli
Date: 4/22/2020 2:02:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I enjoyed your poems too.

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/15/2015 3:55:00 AM

It is an athletic poem about a world entire who lives in your soul, but not at random, because you are predestined for much more.Congrat.

Gideon Foli
Date: 1/9/2016 1:30:00 AM

Thanks for the word of encouragement. Love from me to you.