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Lick Your Lips - Limerick

Lick Your Lips - Limerick An old man chronologically aging Ate foods quite gastronomically raging He digested word soups With phonetic sound groups Which left him alphabetically phrasing Created on 11/17/14 for -Limericks Clean and Clever – Poetry contest

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Date: 11/18/2014 4:53:00 AM
Clean and very clever!!!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/18/2014 9:02:00 AM
Hi Terry, Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and happy that you enjoyed it. I wanted the old man to eat some of that good old fashioned hearty & healthy Poetry Soup but I ran out of words to define it and serve it... Have a great day. Take care. Earl
Date: 11/17/2014 4:03:00 PM
lol loved this earl good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/17/2014 5:57:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This is an experiment. I'm trying it out for fun. In the last line, last word, I wanted to use "grazing" but that would be stretching the envelope out of its paper. I hope you have a nice evening. See ya! Earl

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