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Lennie the Lion

This princely lion called Lennie In the zoo pub he had one too many He awoke to exposure Being in the wrong enclosure Cuddling a princess lioness called Jennie

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/9/2010 9:50:00 PM

I didn't know they had zoo pubs...or else I might have been in one...lol. Congrats on the clever write and the win. Dan C

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 5/9/2010 2:31:00 PM

James, I liked thgis one, tgoo! It was immediately funny and what's more- I could see this as a visual of a blackout skit in the great old cartoons of yesteryear. It is that funny! I liked it! Regards, Gerard

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/8/2010 6:44:00 PM

congratulations on your success in the contest James, I got a nice smile out of this one...Margaret

Date: 5/8/2010 6:03:00 PM

Liked this the first time I read it. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Keep that humor coming. Enjoy your honor. Karen

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/8/2010 5:31:00 PM

Cool James --"Love is in the lair" hee hee Great one - Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2010 5:23:00 PM

very cute! congratulations, James.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/8/2010 1:37:00 PM

Congrats James on your success in my contest with your lion Limerick.. thankxxx for your supporting them too..luv.. Linda-Marie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/8/2010 3:19:00 AM

Mr Highlander,hope Jenny was not owned by a lion called Kennie, haha. .looved this one..Charma

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/7/2010 6:55:00 PM

Good one James. even the lions can get into trouble after the pub...good luck...Margaret

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/7/2010 6:24:00 PM

Witty poem, James. I hope Jennie wasn't guarding some cubs or Lennie could be in for a licking. Best, CD

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/7/2010 5:05:00 PM

uhoh!! He is gonna get it, funny!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/7/2010 4:23:00 PM

Every limerick I read tops the last one. Good luck in the contest. .Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2010 4:13:00 PM

they are looking real fun, got a good one out of this one, good luck in the contest,..p.d

Date: 5/7/2010 2:29:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Nice one! Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen