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To my Daddy, Richard Hundley <3<3

Legacy of Hope: My Dad

Legacy of Hope; My Dad

My first memories are full of your dear face
Kind brown eyes, edged with wrinkles, a mere trace
I can't see a frown nor fretful scowl, only a gap toothed grin
With a pompadour, shiny, slick, and black as sin
So pleasing and handsome, lanky, laid back stance
Graceful limbs, in motion, like an underwater
 dream dance
I picture your gentle hands, known as well as my own
Square nails, clean, soft, sign language for,  “home”.

My first memories are full of your sweet voice
Telling tales, laughing, and singing, you rejoice
About your love for God, for family, and of wholesome fun
The Sun shines brighter with every string you pluck, every chord you strum
Lighting up my life, bringing warmth and feeding my very soul
Never allowing the hard times, the bitterness,  take a toll

My first memories are full of compassion and true love
My Daddy, trusted to save me from fear, 
My father, bringing peace like the dove
From first memory to a lifetime, gifted with you always standing by
Unable to repay you but with all that's in me, I'll try
Taking all that I have learned from you, kindness, compassion, fun silliness too,
I'll hold your familiar hand as my face fades from your view, 
My last memory of this man,
my beloved Dad, 
will be full of hope, bittersweet, but not sad.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/19/2024 8:39:00 AM
Marvellous tribute to your father. Daughters are often attached to their fathers whilst males like me turn to our mothers. Your poem is a fine example of adulation to a loved father. Great imagery and flow.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/19/2024 10:33:00 AM
Hi there! Thanks for reading and your kind comments! Appreciate the encouragement!xo
Date: 5/19/2024 4:28:00 AM
A beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your dad, I did not have much of a relationship with mine, but I am happy you had such a tender one with yours... So beautifully expressed.. A beautiful song for this could be you can let go now daddy... I am sure you know it..
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/19/2024 7:26:00 AM
Tysm Silent One, we all have different experience in our childhood, and yes,I was very blessed with kind parents. A dream childhood. I'm sorry you didn't have that but you've taken your experience and offered yourself and your heart break, your joy, and pain, to words...a positive outlet for all that! Without your experiences your poetry wouldn't be the lovely expressions we are blessed to share. Xo
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