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Last Year's Nests

I viewed them the spring before – robins in our grass and swallows flying circles around the front of the house. Weeks later I spied their nests - the swallows’ under an eave of our garage and the robins’ hidden in a cluster of our pear tree’s lovely green boughs. I wish to have seen the eggs the robins surely laid, but their nest was too high up. The swallows’ nest intrigued me more, for I was able to easily witness the hatchlings’ progress. Periodically the parent birds came to feed them. Eagerly I’d step off my porch when I saw the parents swooping down and then soaring back to the sky. Sometimes they whizzed close by my head as if to scold me for my curiosity in their offspring; I was a trespasser on my own land. Next year I will await them, but I think they will not return. Always the robins return, but knowing swallows as I do. . . their last year’s nest is sure to sit lonely and unvisited. Nov. 24, 2019 for Craig Cornish's "Last Year's Nests" Poetry Contest (this actually happened several years ago, and the swallows never returned)

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Date: 12/12/2019 5:16:00 AM
You can have some of ours we get tons of them every spring.
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Date: 11/30/2019 8:02:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Andrea
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Date: 11/27/2019 6:22:00 PM
So profoundly captures both hope and loneliness, this is very moving-
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Date: 11/25/2019 3:42:00 PM
I remember you mentioning this in another poem Andrea. Beautifully penned! xxoo
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Date: 11/25/2019 3:13:00 PM
We have barn swallows here and they come back every year. I am sure that it could be their young but they seem to increase in number each year. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/25/2019 12:37:00 AM
" I was a trespasser on my own land." - I love this line and this poem Andrea.
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Date: 11/25/2019 12:35:00 AM
I just love it. It's a wonderful poem for the contest and a sure winner. God bless you dear Andrea... with love, Gina
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Date: 11/24/2019 9:54:00 PM
Hi Andrea Beautiful work of art. I will be returning to congratulate you :) Thanks for sharing this
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Date: 11/24/2019 9:08:00 PM
Andrea, So enjoyed this melody of flight you wove. The dive bombing birds can really tear up the sky. Though the dog pays them no mind. When will last year's swallows return to the nest. Well done. -Richard
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