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Keep Breathing

Your flying over cloud nine So hard for the world to see behind your tears Its raining too much,but your always raining too much You take a deep breathe,you take it all in with too much fear Fear wont help you breathe,so moron,inhale and exhale through your lungs And now your falling from cloud nine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/24/2011 8:35:00 PM
Sajdah... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
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Date: 10/20/2010 8:57:00 AM
Wow, i reallly love this. Im feeling it with the impact from the fall...
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Date: 6/5/2010 11:04:00 PM
amazing write.and a great push forward for all that need a helping hand. haha,lol. moron?((: -always&forever lynette
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Date: 6/4/2010 9:04:00 AM
A pretty powerful poem, Sajdah. It seems to be written to a specific person. I too know some people in my life, who need to learn how to "take things in" and BREATHE!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/4/2010 7:02:00 AM
This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Sajdah. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 2:06:00 PM
Thought provoking.. ~ rgds WN
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Date: 6/3/2010 1:55:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one.Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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