In the Harem of the Flower Kisser

at the break of dawn a Hummingbird starts his rounds Morning Glory sought flaunting a red hue - Mexican Sunflower tempts looking hot, hot, hot the Don Juan of birds sucking nectar from Beardtongue. . . drunk on French kisses Goldenrod at noon. . . Zephyr carries a sweet scent beneath a gold sun between Rose bushes the Flower Kisser gets lost in Blue Infinity Sweet Pea and Bee Balm entice with purple petals. . . Bees join the orgy Monarchs swarm in droves when blue Hummingbird alights on Butterfly Bush Evening Primrose waving in the dusk’s last breeze. . . the proper lover the Flower Kisser leaves his harem sated as white Moonflower glows *The capitalized names for flowers represent some of the most popular flowers visited by hummingbirds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 12/28/2015 4:31:00 PM
I like the connection you put between the bird and the flower. I really like that you call it a flower kisser. Well done with your win.
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Date: 12/26/2015 5:29:00 PM
I love how you spiced this one up Andrea...Congrats on your 1st place win
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Date: 12/26/2015 4:53:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your fine win and placement in the Skat's Flower contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/26/2015 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this fine contest my friend! Your poem is an image delight and hummingbirds are my favorite birds..
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Date: 12/26/2015 8:45:00 AM
Very nice Andrea. I like this one. Congratulations on your 1st place win!!
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Date: 12/26/2015 6:43:00 AM
Very beautiful poem! :) Congratulations!!!
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Date: 12/26/2015 1:24:00 AM
Congratulations! This is something new for me and cannot be that easy to do. Certainly #1. and a 7.
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Date: 12/25/2015 8:59:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your flower win. Love Linda
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Date: 12/25/2015 8:19:00 PM
I enjoyed this very creative winning poem, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 12/25/2015 8:08:00 PM
Hello Andrea, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting the Skat Flower Contest theme. :) Stop by and enjoy the flowers on Skat's Latest blog. "Sounds Like A Yes :)" You might pick a flower or two. MERRY CHRISTMAS
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:21:00 AM
so sweet. Andrea....SKAT
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Date: 5/20/2014 6:08:00 AM
Fantastic use of imagery; even though I know nothing about flowers, your Haiku conjures a cornucopia of colours in my mind's eye. Extra kudos for making linked Haiku appear almost effortless. Well done!
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Date: 6/5/2012 3:28:00 AM
Beautifully clever and touching.... i quite happily flowed through with your write and thoroughly enjoyed my minds eye visit... thanks for your help on mine also..karen (a fav to study and learn later )
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Date: 5/1/2012 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Sweet Flowers & Hummingbirds" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2012 3:30:00 PM
Charming write no matter what you call them ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2012 7:23:00 PM
This made me sigh with pleasure..congrats on another splendid piece. BG
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Date: 4/25/2012 12:33:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Very creative indeed..Sara
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Date: 4/25/2012 11:32:00 AM
Andrea, yuppers... ..Congratulations with your wonderful win,,, ... ;-) always~PD
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Date: 4/25/2012 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations. i love the title. Great collection of haiku.
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Date: 4/25/2012 5:42:00 AM
nicely done Andrea...congrats on your win...love...Joseph
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Date: 4/25/2012 4:15:00 AM
Beautiful sets of Haikus,Andrea...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest..."Mexican sunflower tempts".....Hmm...
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Date: 4/25/2012 1:17:00 AM
Andrea huge congrats on your great win, you ok..David
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Date: 4/24/2012 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your 1st place win.Now stop him.
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Date: 4/24/2012 9:30:00 PM
a wonderful win, siddy
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Date: 4/24/2012 9:05:00 PM
I think you should post a warning...fast moving object on screen....COULD CAUSE SEIZURES! lol...You wrote so beautifully with not a single flower left out! An ode to the hummingbird! I simply loved this haiku series! Congrats on its success! (The evening primrose is the proper lover! You got that one right! Wow.) Gwendolen
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