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I'Ll Shush You Guys

There was a young mother from Maine Whose children were really a pain. They cared not a rap That she needed a nap, So she drove them all out in the rain. Written around Deborah Guzzi's poem "Shshshsh ma is Sleeping" for her contest. Sorry Deborah. No way would I try to correct your poetry. 9th place

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Date: 7/30/2010 12:42:00 PM
I love this limerick.Congratulations!
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Critcise Me". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:23:00 PM
Congratulations, Joyce on your success in Deborah's Contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/24/2010 6:49:00 AM
lol...Funny! This is a limerick well done! Good luck in the contest : )
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Date: 7/23/2010 5:26:00 PM
Quite humorous yet a situation a ma faces often.
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