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I wasn't sure what it was he said but it meant a lot to me

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Poetic Form: Narrative
Inspired: 2024 April 30
Image: Bavarian Village by bpprodstorage

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KEY: A: An American Man B: A British Man *It be a late evening in a semi-lively lightly plastered crowded pub near Bavarian Village in Hyde Park, London, England, UK.
A: "Charlie 'Ole England, hey, my friend!" B: "Eh, 'tis bloke sez, Charl'lee, like Joel'lee eh, tat's a rich one, you're from the States?" A: "Yes, I am, excuse me, but I'm actually looking for the bathroom, --bad!" B: "You mean the loo, wel' ya do look a bit heady, wright down ther' at the n'd of the 'allway!" A: "Thanks, my friend!" B: "Bez' be off wit' ya, matey, ther'd mite-be a Q down ther'!" A: "A what?" (Halfway down the hallway he stops and turns) B: "A LINE!" A: "Oh." B: "Off too the lil' boys room wit' ya, ore ther'd be a Spring in ya, Summin' up long befor' the Fall in Winter's Hole!" "HA!" (the Pub breaks out laughing) A: "Oh whatever, ah! This must be Windsor Hall?"
#1. I wasn’t sure what it was he said but it meant a lot to me.

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Date: 5/1/2024 1:35:00 PM
Hello, I agree with Victor and Sarach. Very creative
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/1/2024 2:33:00 PM
Most appreciative of your kind share, Koyoto. Aloha, William.
Date: 4/30/2024 5:53:00 AM
an enjoyable exchange and a creative write for the contest! Nicely done. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Hilo Poet
Date: 4/30/2024 6:49:00 AM
I think William is in Windsor Castle/Hall since Charles is in Buckingham Palace. Thank you, Sara. Aloha, William
Date: 4/30/2024 5:40:00 AM
I loved this conversation with good English on one part and slang on the other. Well done.
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Date: 4/30/2024 5:52:00 AM
Oh, Victor. Good to have you back so soon, my friend. You're a breath of Spring's end. Aloha, William

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