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I Need Prayers My Friends - Please Spread The Word.

(I hope you don't mind I have repeated myself here in case you did not see this request on my first post.)

By now I thought I would have returned to Poetry Soup. Many of you know I care for my bed ridden mother 24/7 at my home where I have set up a mini hospital situation. 

Some of you may not know I am a single Father with two young Daughters 22 and 19. My eldest daughter after being clean for 11 months is now struggling with addiction again.

She relapsed about three months ago. We tried a detox center but that failed. Now she is trying to detox at home with my help. Today is day four. So far it has been very hard on her. She also tells me the cravings are very hard on her but she is fighting the good fight.

I am asking for prayers for my daughter. Thank You with all my love in advance. Please feel free to post your own requests for prayers. We all need friends at times. 

I will do my best to get around to reading and commenting on your poems my friends when ever I find the time. 

On a completely unrelated topic not pertaining to my daughter I have an old series of poems I wrote all on the same topic from one of the contests "I Think Of You" that of course I never entered. 

Here is part 1 the second poem from that series. Each poem is meant to stand on its own but the whole series tells a complete story.

I Think Of You - Ground Zero (Part 1) Leaving under a blood moon in a jet plane rising los angeles falls behind me and I... You. Two. Clouds dance to the song of the spiders. Latent sun rays fall on me like rain...I ...They say third time's the charm. On planes again. A sky...endless... and then finally from the other end of the world to here. A continent, an island, an australian flower drunk on wine. Her...uniqueness lends to her beauty. ...and I A fourth night. A church spire at sunset. At a distance bats fill the sky, resemble a smoke plume. ...I I plead the fifth. It's all these moons. Tonight a hunter's moon. She's unable to hide even with her bowl of clouds. It's no help. She has no spoon. Her luminous rays give her up. Moonshine in the moonlight over the sea. ...I I count...five, six...on the beach. A purple nightshade, a sand flower, Irish eyes speak uniquely to me. ....I I, you... you can't roll a seven with one die. Back on a plane. A snow fog blinding. From my window seat a one of a kind view. Alone, ...I I eight...ate...need to eat. Africa...a Safari. A plant chloroform green has holes like cheese. A large swiss leaf. I laugh and I...I distract myself. A stitch in time beats nine. Back in North America. A dilapidated fortress stares down an overwhelming thunderhead. ...I I camp out. It requires a tenth...tent. An Eagle never blinks. No eye lids. An unimpeded view. ...but I...I surrender. There is no place in the world I can escape. ...I i think of you. You are living art. Here. Now. What I perceive is what I live. I perceive us. I can picture you. I am photography, the camera, the lens. I absorb your image, process it. A form of plagiarism I didn't borrow. I stole. Inhaled you but ...I I dream and I... ...i think of you. Armand March 11 2015

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Date: 12/16/2015 2:04:00 AM
..Your words, superb. Thank you for sharing Maurice, it is intensely difficult and heartbreaking this addiction to overcome; as my boyfriend of 2 years is trying again also. It's his 3rd day. I shall remember you and yours, my prayers as well. Peace be with you. e
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Date: 4/18/2015 12:19:00 PM
A very imaginative trip, Armand, kind of other worldly. I want to keep good thoughts toward your daughter. I have been down the road - with alcoholism - so I can, to a small extent sympathize, though I've never been on the hard stuff. I tend toward Buddhism which says May the Blessings Be. Love, daver
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Date: 4/8/2015 1:54:00 PM
I especially love your poetry after drinking Red Bull, Linda
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Date: 4/7/2015 8:37:00 PM
Very strong feelings, feeling each one with family love and you are a beautiful poet of inner soul
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Date: 4/4/2015 3:17:00 PM
Very strong feelings and graphic words here Maurice, I am wishing the best for your daughter and you all.) God bless..'
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Date: 4/2/2015 5:20:00 PM
Well Armand? That was most excellent I love the use of the 'hanging I????' very effective. I read them all soon Light & love
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Date: 4/1/2015 8:02:00 PM
I know this feeling, because I am going through it now. When you miss someone, but you see them everywhere. They're always on your mind, but not really there... A very emotive piece, Armand. Great work! I will be back to read more of this series!
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Date: 3/28/2015 8:09:00 AM
Oh wow... I am hooked...
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Date: 3/27/2015 11:09:00 AM
I'm sorry to here about your family problems. May the blessings be. This is more Hindu than Christian. Forgive me, but my eyesight is so poor I must use a magnifying glass to read everything, so I don't read long poems. I will try to find something short of yours to comment on. Love, daver
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Date: 3/25/2015 7:43:00 PM
the love pours out Maurice whimsical and enticing hugs7
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:43:00 AM
That was incredible! Masterful imagery from one of my favorite poets.
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Date: 3/23/2015 9:14:00 AM
Maurice, your writing in this poem reminds me of a series of dreams, some beautiful and some frightening, a perfect 7 rating and thanks for visiting my makeover poem and I agree I like the original much better, I think it was written with more emotion . . .
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Date: 3/16/2015 3:47:00 PM
Dear Armand, this poem is so very beautiful. I am sending prayers and have asked the Angels to help all of you. Congrats on POTD. Blessings and love, Connie
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/20/2015 3:11:00 PM
Your kindness shines a bright light my way, thank you Connie!
Date: 3/16/2015 8:18:00 AM
Another one to fav, a tremendous write ...Seren
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/20/2015 3:10:00 PM
Love you Seren!
Date: 3/16/2015 1:22:00 AM
You and your family will be remembered in my prayers Armand... hope thinks take a turn for the better... and a beautiful poem you have written...nice form.. nad
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/20/2015 3:09:00 PM
Thank you so much poesy, God bless you and yours.
Date: 3/15/2015 9:35:00 AM
You are most welcome, I am overjoyed by your response.
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Date: 3/15/2015 8:40:00 AM
Father of goodness and love, we pray that you might lay your hands for the healing of spirit, mind and body, upon Maurice, his daughter,and mother in the Name of our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. Amen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2015 9:37:00 AM
Amen Eve!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/15/2015 8:59:00 AM
Amen. Bless you and thank you, I am convinced that selfless prayer is the most potent gift we can offer. Lots Of Love Always!
Date: 3/15/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thank You Char the Poetry Soup software does not allow a reply to anyone on the second page. I am sorry. Your loyalty and unconditional support has touched my heart. Friends always. Lots Of Love. Armand
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:44:00 AM
Thank You George & Dee Vuy the Poetry Soup software does not allow a reply to anyone on the second page. I am sorry. Lots Of Love.
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Date: 3/14/2015 10:34:00 PM
Just came here to see if you had yet posted another one in the series. MISS YOU, ARMAND. Come back!! And praying for you and your family as well.
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Date: 3/14/2015 8:44:00 PM
Hi Armand, I have dedicated a poem to you.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/15/2015 7:39:00 AM
I read your dedication Richard. It is brilliant. I hope it will receive all the favs it deserves. Again, thank you!
Date: 3/14/2015 10:40:00 AM
Much love and light -- you and your family are in my prayers. Congrats on POTD and great to see you writing and posting again. 7
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/15/2015 7:37:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. We have had a setback with my daughter. Yesterday was a bad day. With God's help, your prayers and hard work from my we will beat this monster. I have cut and paste this to answer everyone. I intend to read and comment on your poetry. At the moment I am overwhelmed by my day to day life. You have no idea how much you are all helping me. Lots Of Love!
Date: 3/14/2015 7:40:00 AM
I continue to pray for you Armand. Amazing poetry (not a adequate descriptor) congratulations on poem of the day.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/15/2015 7:36:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. We have had a setback with my daughter. Yesterday was a bad day. With God's help, your prayers and hard work from my we will beat this monster. I have cut and paste this to answer everyone. I intend to read and comment on your poetry. At the moment I am overwhelmed by my day to day life. You have no idea how much you are all helping me. Lots Of Love!
Date: 3/14/2015 2:42:00 AM
WOW. Breathtaking! Congrats on poem of the day!
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Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/15/2015 8:52:00 AM
Sending you prayers. When we stand together we are strong! Fight on! With everyone's positive spirits behind you, you can beat it! (sorry, cheesy Japanese cheering does work....) Good luck!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/15/2015 7:36:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. We have had a setback with my daughter. Yesterday was a bad day. With God's help, your prayers and hard work from my we will beat this monster. I have cut and paste this to answer everyone. I intend to read and comment on your poetry. At the moment I am overwhelmed by my day to day life. You have no idea how much you are all helping me. Lots Of Love!
Date: 3/13/2015 6:57:00 PM
congrats on Poem of the Day :-) Hugs jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 3/15/2015 9:00:00 AM
Thank you my dear, dear friend!
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