I Am Sadness

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Contest: Let's Get Emotional -
Personification in a Sicilian Quintain Stanza
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich

This moonless night invokes a lonely spell as I behold Earth's sky of midnight blue. Now void of light that moon and stars propel, this deep, dark blanket brings to my sad view- the nothingness beyond what stars foretell.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/31/2024 12:06:00 AM

Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/30/2024 12:13:00 PM

Ooo... how gloomy. Definitely feel the emotion you're going for with these expressive lines! Congratulations! Xo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2024 3:33:00 PM

I adore the imagery here, Sandra. So beautiful. Congrats on a top win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2024 8:16:00 PM

Wow! Invokes a sad emotion!