I Am Fear

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I'm what triggers anxieties climb; stocking darkness shrouded in shadow. Around since the primordial slime; the more you feed me, the more I grow, morphing into terror over time. I'm what makes you shiver in the dark; the icy chill that runs up your spine. The dead stare in the eyes of a shark; no persona is darker than mine, sullying beauty till life seems stark. I'm a phantom that lurks in the night; and razes the short hairs on your neck. I paralyze with a crippling fright; and make people pause and double-check, fueling feelings of fight or flight.

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Crystol Woods

Date: 8/30/2024 12:48:00 PM

Love it! I chose fear as well... so much material to choose from with fear. You've taken a great route here! It is the emotion that kept us alive as prey for bigger predators huh!? Wonderful writing! Xoxo

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2024 7:56:00 AM

Thanks, Crystol; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2024 3:46:00 PM

I got a bit picky that you didn't write anxieties' as possessive. Actually this was a really great poem, Emile. I think the last three lines are outstanding.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/29/2024 7:53:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea; I guess that one slipped by me. I appreciate the comments and the placement, my friend. Emile.