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Hungarian Night Wish

Our little family was together
.......for now
Daddy was asleep on the couch
and I was here sharing your bed
in your little student flat

tomorrow our togetherness would unravel
We'd be forced to travel
leaving you behind
in this enchanting Hungarian city
to make your dream come true 
you'd be a physiotherapy guru
one day

As I struggled with the heaviness in my heart,
a heaviness I knew
you would come to know
when the fullness of motherhood you'd show,
you turned to me and gurgled a laugh
the unfettered kind 
that only comes in dreamland

I gazed at your face in wonder
then it came to me again
another girlish giggle
and just as quickly...it was gone
for your dream carried you
and I was left holding on
desperately wanting this moment to last

I let out a sigh
Looking out of your window
up at the Hungarian sky
my eyes focused on a star 
as my heart breathed a wish
that your laugh would come as readily 
in your wakeful hours
as it did in your dream
that you'd always be cognizant
how blessed you are
My life, my star

I closed my eyes
as I felt the burden slowly shift from my heart
though separation would come in the morning
nothing could steal the memory of that sound
that magical dulcet chime
of my daughter in her prime
blooming with love
for her true mother...
LIFE!

Yes, my sleeping angel
though goodbyes will be said
I know that everything...
Yes, everything
will be alright
for I heard you laugh
in your dreams tonight

Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/6/2017 9:47:00 AM
What a beautiful intimate piece!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2017 2:30:00 AM
Thank you, dear. Shereen is vital to my existence. Hugs
Date: 9/3/2017 6:18:00 AM
Mother-daughter loving bond...Beautiful and full of emotion, Eileen. It is so hard to go, leaving her behind, even though you know that it's only temporary. That laugh is such a lovely memory! Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:07:00 PM
Yes, dear...it surely is. Thank you for your visit, dear. I've been so busy lately with my father's visit and the new academic year, I haven't had much time for PS. I'm also teaching a new course...Intro to Rhetoric. Takes lots of prep work. I'll be by to visit you soon. Hugs, dear one.
Date: 9/2/2017 4:11:00 AM
well penned...it really made my day dear. Bug kudos to you for this awesome work of yours and your pretty daughter
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Ifeanyi. I appreciate your visit and kind words. I miss her so much that at times it is more than I can bear.
Date: 9/1/2017 8:05:00 PM
Your daughter is so beautiful, Eileen, wishing our children's future become their fairytales .. love your poem. Hugs dear friend ~`*
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:21:00 PM
What a sweet post, Eve. I wish so too. Nothing would bring me more joy than to know my daughter is happy and well. Blessings.
Date: 8/30/2017 12:00:00 PM
Oh this is so beautiful and sweet, I really loved how you ended the poem "for I heard you laugh in your dreams tonight" Hugs!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thanks, Arthur. It was a truly magical moment for me. :)
Date: 8/30/2017 5:43:00 AM
Wow! Perfectly written for a most loved daughter from a loving mom, Eileen, wonderful!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:24:00 PM
I am blessed with Shereen. I get jealous sometimes when I see how close she is to her father...that's just me. She comes to me with the relationship issues, so I'm just needed! ;) Hugs and thanks
Date: 8/30/2017 2:31:00 AM
What a perfect picture of motherly love Eileen in your heartfelt poem. It's hard to say goodbye after you have spent precious time with your daughter but you have wonderful memories and I'm sure she misses you as much as you do her. Now its her time to fly and she is following her dream and will make you so so proud when she graduates:-) She is a stunning as her mum!:-) hugs jan x
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:26:00 PM
You are so kind, Jan. Thank you for this lovely compliment. Yes...I try to remember that when the ache gets too much. I can't keep her in the nest forever, but I hope that she will be protected wherever she goes by angels. Hugs, dear.
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