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blue or pink beats fast ~magical wrapped hopes growing~ life will open eyes

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/13/2024 8:58:00 AM

Dear Maria, You have wonderfully encapsulated the wondrous anticipation and boundless hope accompanying the journey of parenthood. I loved how the simplicity of your language belies the depth of emotion and significance behind each word. Maria, this is a beautiful reflection on the miracle of life and the joy of new beginnings. - Blessings, Daniel

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/13/2024 12:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Daniel for your always kind words. I hope you have a great afternoon. Blessings!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/12/2024 9:31:00 PM

Perfect vision that imparts hope. Great haiku.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/13/2024 12:45:00 AM

Thank you very much Victor. Blessings!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/12/2024 5:41:00 PM

Dear Maria, your poem about the fleeting beauty and eternity of life is truly superb. It conveys the essence of hope. This poem is incredibly brittle, brimming with supple metaphors.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/13/2024 12:46:00 AM

Thank you very much dear Sotto. Have a great week!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/12/2024 5:16:00 PM

such a delicate poem filled with soft imagery. Perfect! Loved it. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/13/2024 12:47:00 AM

Good morning Sara. Thank you so much. I hope you have a nice week!