Hoar's Frost

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Last night's hoar's frost melted watering dormant tulip trees Trees who wait for soil's warmth to awake spring's renewal growth The white blanket thrown back, wrinkles remain as does white hair

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2024 10:40:00 AM

Lovely, my friend!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/16/2024 5:04:00 PM

wonderful imagery. I've read about hoar's frost...I liked your poem...have a great evening, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 5:24:00 AM

Thank you, Sara B. I appreciate your visit and have a wonderful day. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 1/16/2024 12:51:00 PM

This one is always very good.. great imagery and a tough choice which one would be best for the contest..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2024 1:18:00 PM

Thank you, SO. Not for the contest. I am still working on trying to write the right one. LOL..Thanks for the visit and the help. Sara K