Hershey Squirts

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Lingering in the morning air The pungent smell of derriere Burrito with Beans Cause the morning screams The dreaded Hershey squirts beware

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/14/2020 2:59:00 PM

Yup. Know 'em well. lol. ~ Backdoor trucks

Mark Koplin
Date: 5/14/2020 5:04:00 PM

The Backdoor blues, hey that would make a good poem! Lol

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/14/2020 2:52:00 PM

LOL!!!! From the title, first thing to pop in my brain, was when my first dog ate a dark chocolate bar, she was fine of course, but it was the picking up the Hershey swirls in the snow with vanilla scented bags that made me laugh...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/14/2020 8:51:00 PM

I believe it. They no dummies. ;),

Mark Koplin
Date: 5/14/2020 5:03:00 PM

Omg you are an absolute riot! My son dropped an Advil on the kitchen floor and said the wiener dog ate. After water boarding her with hydrogen peroxide to make her puke it up I found it on the floor under the table. She never looked at us the same after that

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/14/2020 2:57:00 PM

When my second dog did the same, she was so messed up. Fried. Hilariously, cross eyed, running in circles. Add the torture, shoving mustard powder in water down her throat trying in vain to make her vomit. They're sneaky, they don't go after it until they feel you have left them alone too long.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/14/2020 12:58:00 PM

Abandon ship, abandon ship, Open all portholes. Lol. Jan is a good (or bad) influence, never wrote a limerick until I met Jan on here. Tom

Mark Koplin
Date: 5/14/2020 1:38:00 PM

I know right! I thought I would give it a go lol

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2020 12:14:00 PM

ha ha ha you are hilariarse Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin
Date: 5/14/2020 1:39:00 PM

I dropped that one out