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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 May 10
Image: Happy Mother's Day Pink Stairway by lingway designs

Pink Sky Silver Heavenly Mothers Day Heavens Stairway Memorial Background PNG add photo rest in peace template for funeral RIP Memorial image 1
 
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Spring: Beginning, the practice run, Hello, hallowed ..., Aubade; Cringe reflections and spare the fun, hues, tints, oh yes, and shade, Buds burst surprise, blossoms, seize eyes, generous period, A blessed privilege, high-fives; Calendar flips ..., we did.
Sacrifice--pointless, glorifies the ends, Journey is central to all: Grace commends,
Absent Summer lengthens lost Spring, awed odd ..., the wherewithal, trades Autumn--an Indian thing, laze, haze, -e: Lyrical, Sunny vale Great Wall plastered green, Fall, jogs..., orange phase reds Forgiving Sun hails promise, deemed, Passage joys the nexus.
The trouncing Solar volleys overhead, Amidst seasonal, much spent has been spread,
Acclaimed grape's nest of Autumn's call,      Aster's behavior buds, Imbued of sum days hath tasked tall,      Craves plumb stick-in-the-muds, Plumes launched complimentary shades,       Wakes Sol's amber extremes, Soothes in purplish shallow wades,     Petals freed floats in dreams.
blossoms thickened orchestra crescendos, instrumental Lavenders queue some rows,
Weeping Willow cascades in whites, Winter promptly pros claimed, hither spots fro's dots shine the knights, slumbers groan those untamed, Snowdrops refused floored frost invites, touch and go hast return, inoculate year persuades, last rites, calendrical nocturne.
Pussy Willow obliged, sensed indulgence, Climes Recipe: no salt, light temperateness,
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Quietude insists weighed pleasures Mom's farmhouse chair, idyll, receptive, emptiness measures stand, vase, and closed bible.
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Date: 5/10/2024 10:02:00 AM
Very creative and poignant tribute to your 'heavenly Mom'. Well penned.
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Date: 5/10/2024 10:22:00 AM
Thanks, Jay, I am appreciative for your expression and sharing visit. Aloha, William
Date: 5/10/2024 4:29:00 AM
this is one of the most creative poems I've seen in quite sometime...a stunning poem written to your 'heavenly mother.' The seasonal outpouring was sublime--your gift to your mom. Touching at the end. Have a splendid day, Sara
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Date: 5/10/2024 8:41:00 AM
I am grateful for your thought filled expressions, Sara. Aloha, William.
Date: 5/10/2024 1:37:00 AM
If you have a short summer, you're lucky Soon it will be an open oven. Lovely imagery and beautiful card.
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Date: 5/10/2024 2:11:00 AM
Victor, I've read your piece ere my note to you here to which I'll answer you hereafter. Considering time one indulge in their writing to which subject matter takes center stage, switching aspects and attached reflections, topped with the yet to be of reasoned date bears on truth an international divides, reflects no more or less of either subject referenced, then respectful understanding. Aloha.

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