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Harusame - Spring Rain

charcoal-smudged heavens distant rumbles edge closer first spring rain welcomed --------------------------- (C) 29th April 2017 Includes the seasonal phrase harusame / spring rain. Entered in "One Haiku - Old or New..." contest, sponsored by Rick Parise. (10th Place)

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/12/2017 6:25:00 PM

Such a pure and beautiful haiku John. An amazing write that I truly enjoyed!

John Michaels
Date: 11/13/2017 2:27:00 AM

Thanks so much, Susan. All the best, John.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/13/2017 7:42:00 PM

This piece made me yearn for the showers of spring... Congrats John, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

John Michaels
Date: 11/13/2017 2:16:00 AM

Thanks for your kind comments, Teddy. Apologies for not replying to this one sooner; think it slipped through the net. All the best, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2017 2:48:00 PM

Nicely done, John. congrats on the winners' list

John Michaels
Date: 6/12/2017 5:57:00 PM

Thanks very much for the congrats! Regards, John.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/4/2017 12:10:00 PM

I'm blessed with some spring rain right now and your beautiful haiku just compliments the very sentiments I am feeling! Love it! Hugs. Pandita

John Michaels
Date: 6/4/2017 12:33:00 PM

Thanks for the kind and supportive comments, Pandita. That Spring rain can be just the ticket for banishing the Winter blues! All the best, John.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/1/2017 10:24:00 AM

Morning John. I have such respect for you all that write in the format for it truly is unique and specialized. I found it to in true form voice and tone. Well done completely and entirely.

John Michaels
Date: 5/1/2017 10:47:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments, as always! Very much appreciated. Regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2017 5:16:00 PM

Nice one, John

John Michaels
Date: 4/30/2017 6:10:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea.