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haiku-weeping willow trees are very beautiful to me. They grow in toward water. weeping willow sways hazy through a summer screen wild waltz in hot wind 8/4/20 Traditional Haiku - Nature Themed' Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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James Horn

Date: 9/6/2020 7:18:00 AM

I always enjoy writing Horn Haiku. Yours is wonderful painting a great picture.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/10/2020 7:27:00 AM

Gorgeous haiku! I am particularly fond of the willow too. Congratulations for your win! xomo

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2020 1:02:00 PM

I love weeping willow trees, many congratulations on your win janis:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/8/2020 12:34:00 PM

Beautiful Janis. congrats on a top win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2020 9:49:00 AM

That last line was exceptional! Congrats on your win. Love willows!!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/8/2020 6:29:00 AM

I could picture that hot summer wind and the swaying weeping willow Janis. Congratulations on your win! :)

Mark Koplin

Date: 8/7/2020 6:53:00 PM

Beautiful! Congratulations on your win

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/7/2020 12:33:00 PM

I do love the way willow trees move in the wind. You captured that beautifully in your "wild waltz!" Congratulations on your win!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/7/2020 9:08:00 AM

Beautifully done, Janis! Congratulations on your win!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/7/2020 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love the images of weeping willow.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/7/2020 4:15:00 AM

Janis, congratulations on your winning placement with your gorgeous haiku!

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/18/2018 11:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Jean Murray

Date: 4/17/2018 1:47:00 PM

One of my favourite trees. So calming to be beneath, especially when they sway. Congratulations Sian.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/17/2018 11:45:00 AM

Gorgeous! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!

Mick Talbot

Date: 4/17/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thanks for your continued support Sian, congratulations on your bronze medal placing... Mick

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/17/2018 10:41:00 AM

So beautiful! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2018 8:03:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/17/2018 7:53:00 AM

Congrats on your bronze medal win, Sian.

Mick Talbot
Date: 4/17/2018 11:29:00 AM

I guess you have had another look at my remit, going to stick with the medals. Thinking of featuring my choices on the remit page too, (just the first three as in 1st, 2nd, 3rd, what do you reckon?