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Haiku 74 - Haiku 75- About a Bookmark

From between pages the forgotten petal falls Her scent still lingers ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ a pressed rose in between pages his fading scent

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/1/2015 1:00:00 PM

oh yes lovely Charmaine...I feel it. Good haiku pair

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/7/2014 4:23:00 PM

duelling haikus both brilliant. you are the queen of the ku!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/6/2014 6:30:00 PM

Lovely and contrasting haiku, Charm. Impressive distinction between "lingers' and "fading". This deserves a fave. // paul

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/6/2014 6:26:00 AM

now that leaves a book mark all by itself excellent pen charmaine

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2014 3:14:00 PM

Wow Charmaine these are simply stunning images - into faves and a 7 from me - one day I will press a rose - I just need to be given one first! Hugs Jan xxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/5/2014 3:10:00 PM

Beautiful.... I love both perspectives.... The scent draws me in.....so romantic the memory..... Hugs Tim