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Haiku 2

soft clouds rolling by back lit by blazing gold sun gentle rain drops fall ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ eagle soars and dives now just a speck in the sky tumbling falling down

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Poet. Undertaker

Date: 8/1/2013 6:33:00 AM

rain with sun. great!(??Jenish

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/2/2013 2:40:00 AM

hi Jenish sometimes that happens more than you realise whence rainbows glad you saw its beauty Shadow x smiles

Dipika Syngai

Date: 8/1/2013 6:30:00 AM

How beautifully written, Shadow! I've just recently started to learn and understand haukis. I hope one day I can write something as good as yours too :D xoxo Dipika

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/2/2013 2:49:00 AM

poet is a learning curve I learned to write them a couple ago months ago read the forms as there are both modern and traditional, nature themes for haukis and tanya are people related If You enjoy writing haukis try writing a Villanella they are fun Shadow x smiles gl

Robert Johnson

Date: 7/31/2013 2:43:00 PM

So nice when someone puts down in poetic pen such moments in life. I think that I will just sit and enjoy the gentle rain. :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/2/2013 2:53:00 AM

hi Robert Ty for visiting my work and for getting enjoyment from it Shadow x smiles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/30/2013 11:19:00 AM

Ahh!! I could see that scene..I wonder if the eagle was on the death flight with his possible mate?...Enjoyed reading your descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 7/30/2013 6:29:00 AM

You are becoming a master of the Haiku form.Loved your haikus and the magic you created in each line.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/30/2013 6:56:00 AM

dearest M.M Ty don't know about the master bit lol just glad that you enjoyed them Love Shadow xox smiles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2013 12:51:00 AM

these are beautiful, Shadow. I like the movement in them!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/30/2013 6:57:00 AM

so kind of you Andrea I enjoy writing Hauki''s Shadow x smiles