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deserted mind parched dunes dent life…promises break hope allures... mirage
April 24, 2018.

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Date: 5/1/2018 7:38:00 PM
Subimal, great imagery {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 5/2/2018 12:41:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 4/29/2018 6:08:00 PM
Back with GRATS, Subimal!
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Date: 5/2/2018 12:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Date: 4/27/2018 2:04:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/29/2018 2:08:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 4/27/2018 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this thoughtful haiku. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/29/2018 2:08:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 4/27/2018 6:25:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/29/2018 2:07:00 AM
Thank you, SS.
Date: 4/26/2018 10:58:00 PM
Congrats, Subimal. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/29/2018 2:07:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 4/24/2018 3:20:00 PM
I enjoyed the connection of the images dune with mirage in this one, Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/25/2018 2:30:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. In deserted lives hope is a mirage.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/25/2018 2:30:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. In deserted lives hope is a mirage.

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