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Haiku - Movement

in the swirling sky a hundred geese fly in form- tree sparrows flutter _____________________ May 6, 2020 Poetry/haiku/movement Copyright Protected, ID 20-1249-262-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, A Haiku With Movement sponsor, Tania Kitchin Second Place

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/10/2020 6:22:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! God bless you.

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2020 9:23:00 AM

Beata, thanks for the visit and congrats _Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 5/10/2020 2:26:00 AM

Back with big congratulations. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2020 9:23:00 AM

Thanks _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2020 9:50:00 PM

wow, you did an amazing job here, Constance. Very well deserved win. Congratulations

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2020 9:23:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for the visit and for the compliment and congratulations _Constance

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/9/2020 8:58:00 PM

A wonderful contrast is drawn between the graceful flight of geese and the flitting of sparrows. Fantastic imagery, Constance. Congratulations on your excellent win in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2020 9:24:00 AM

Susan, thanks for the congratulations and for the compliment on my haiku _Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/9/2020 4:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Wish I was a bird and could fly away. Enjoy your win and day...........

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2020 9:25:00 AM

Psula, thanks for the congratulations and for the comment, me too _Constance

Paul Callus

Date: 5/9/2020 4:03:00 PM

You paint a striking polaroid picture, Constance. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2020 9:25:00 AM

Paul, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations_Constance

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/9/2020 1:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. We are on the migration path for geese and see this picture all the time. You captured it beautifully.

Constance La France
Date: 5/9/2020 3:54:00 PM

Sam, thanks for the congratulations. I was actually inspired by a huge group of geese flying home.. I heard their loud calls in the sky over my home and went out to watch their perfect but loud formation _ Constance