Haiku - 8

charcoal eyes arranged snowflake smiles fill the day winter's warm hello

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2016 1:00:00 AM

I LOVE it. Hey, is it just me?? I can't work fast here with comments. what is going on?

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/6/2016 1:21:00 PM

Love the charcoal eyes arranged...: )Lovely imagery.

Paloma P

Date: 12/6/2016 10:41:00 AM

You reminded me of a time when snow still made me smile. :)

Darren White

Date: 12/6/2016 9:47:00 AM

Broom kept upside down..//.. In rigid white frozenness..//.. Fake Neptune's trident..//.. It's such a lovely haiku, Tim :) Fave!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/5/2016 2:42:00 PM

Warm enough to melt the snowman's heart! lovely ku Tim.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/5/2016 12:51:00 PM

- Lovely, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2016 11:36:00 AM

absolutely delightful Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/5/2016 9:57:00 AM

When I was younger the snow made me smile because it meant I did not have to go to school that day. Lovely haiku, Tim:)

Chris Green

Date: 12/5/2016 9:34:00 AM

Very nice Tim. Such a wonderful feeling of winter is found in your words.