Greenhorns - Hiku

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*Image of Mars Planet Red by Pixabay & Chemistry on Titan by Space.com. greenhorns commie circle aliens conquest Martians of earth ring of blue hope titan assimilators half breed earthers *Movies; Martian Chronicles, and, The Titan 2021 July 01 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND JULY 3 ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 July 03

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2021 9:52:00 PM

I remember seeing these before. Congrats again, and I was curious. Do you care how many hiku we write? Or do you prefer just one or two?

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/18/2021 10:23:00 PM

Films? Ok, got it, and thanks again as well, Andrea, and as far---as hiku's, the door was left open my friend, Aloha!

David Drowley

Date: 7/6/2021 12:54:00 PM

Congratulations. So compressed, so clear.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/6/2021 3:45:00 PM

That it is, David, in a nutshell, a Hiku my friend, thank you and Aloha!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2021 10:03:00 AM

Many congrats on your win William:-) hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/4/2021 10:33:00 AM

I appreciate it that, Jan, thanks my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2021 8:58:00 AM

way to go. Congrats on the win. I do not even know what hiku is. I need to look up the definition!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/4/2021 10:32:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea, when I first saw it, the haikus had shorter lines, either wholly or in part, not as the contemporary 5-7-5, albeit, where on PS that I saw that is a mystery my friend, Aloha!