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Gravity

full cool turns and rides on pulling slow motion hub induction row hums (c) 12:23 am May 05, 2014

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James Fraser

Date: 11/10/2014 4:14:00 PM

Nice Haiku Olive, you've cracked it, James :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:03:00 PM

thank you

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/9/2014 7:51:00 PM

YES Olive - this is a haiku Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 3:54:00 AM

Thanks Debbie:) GBU

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 7:46:00 PM

Hey girl :) Grats on your win you are awesome :) happy hugs)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 3:54:00 AM

Thank you Cassrah.,:) God bless ;)

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/8/2014 8:25:00 PM

congrats on a great win with this unique take, Olive my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 3:53:00 AM

ThAnk you Arlene..:) Hugs my friend :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 5:28:00 PM

Congratulations on a high placement, Olive. Very nice.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 6:42:00 AM

Thank you Faye..:) GBU kudos too!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2014 3:41:00 PM

I'm enjoying finally getting to see all the wonderful haiku on gravity. Glad to see yours here, dear. Congrats.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 6:42:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..:)

James Fraser

Date: 7/8/2014 9:56:00 AM

Different take on the contest, and so love the angle where your coming from Olive, and cleverly written. Big Congrat's on your deserved placing in the 'Gravity' contest, James.........

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 6:41:00 AM

:) thank you so much James..:) your kind as ever with the comments..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2014 9:48:00 AM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!!! Still flying your flag high:) // paul (just put the kettle on...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 6:39:00 AM

Thanks Paul!!! Let's drink then to relax a bit..:D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/8/2014 12:38:00 AM

Well penned Olive ! Thotful haiku! Congrats on big win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 6:38:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma..:) GBU

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2014 12:18:00 AM

Quite a different approach, loved it and congrats on the win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 6:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Sir..:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:31:00 PM

well done...PD

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 6:36:00 AM

Thanks Lolli pretty Pd..:)

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:14:00 PM

Olive :) Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 6:36:00 AM

Thank you Skat..:D

Joseph May

Date: 5/27/2014 11:10:00 AM

Lovely write Olive....thank you for your kind words..hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 7:11:00 AM

Thank you too, Joseph.. :) you deserve them anyway.. :) and well your writes are really good

Paul Callus

Date: 5/26/2014 4:31:00 PM

This is a clever take Olive_eloi! gl in contest:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 6:39:00 PM

Mammon yes maybe maybe..:)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/28/2014 12:36:00 PM

Let's say that gravity deals with nature, so for sure it is correct in that aspect! the rest lies in the 'eye' of the judge!:)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 7:00:00 AM

Thanks Paul.. :D though am not sure that this really falls into a haiku though.. :O the syllables i know ok but the other criteria for haiku... mmmn?