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God's Poetry

“With grandeur and beauty melded into rhyme, poetry is painting that is felt than seen” by Poet From my window I lazily watch, The phenomenal transition from dusk to night. The evening’s brilliance giving way to twilight haze, And the reddened sky turning sallow as a sick patient. Darkness like downy feathers descending, Wrapping the Earth in a gray woolen mantle. Light and darkness embracing in a breathless kiss, Like shocking colors blended on a wide canvas! The night has now grown mysterious and enigmatic, Putting the weary Nature into indolent repose. Before my eyes, stretches a vast plane, Whose boundaries have dimmed beyond all trace. Here and there some monstrous shapes peek out. I see the dark silhouettes of trees supine, Brooding sage like, in the thickening gloom. I watch the wide panorama lying still, And the clear star-spangled sky above. The moon has begun her stately round. In flashing dress, she swaggers past the clouds, As if patrolling to guard the sleeping Earth. She has taken the place of the ousted king of the day. A calming breeze caresses my face and ruffles my hair. Though darkness envelops all around me, I hear the whispered promise of a day that shall soon unfold. As I hear this rhythm of Nature falling in my ears, In every beat, I hear God’s kind of poetry recited. Looking at this night, God’s artwork of sheer beauty, I feel heaven has descended down to Earth. Never is a moment more glorious than this, When darkness has accentuated the heavenly lights! Jan. 23. 2023 ~ Placed Second~ Submitted forStrand Premiere. No.1196 . Poetry Contest 2022, Marathon Mile. 25. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Mark Toney

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Date: 3/18/2023 1:24:00 PM
This is so full of majestic imagery that I had to reread several times. Nicely penned Valsa! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/12/2023 10:56:00 AM
A glorious poem, dear Valsa! I love "Darkness, like downy feathers descending, wrapping Earth in a grey, woolen mantle."--so soft and warm, a lovely feeling they give. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2023 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Valsa
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Date: 3/11/2023 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your podium win with this so lovely poem dear, Valsa.
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Date: 1/27/2023 6:21:00 AM
Valsa: I was mesmerized - right there in the moment with you. The beauty of God’s work is awe inspiring as is your glorifying poem.Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 1/24/2023 8:07:00 AM
This is a fabulous painting of creative words and masterpiece glorifying God's artwor! I'm giving a hug and a fave for another poem of yours tonight my dear Valsa. I love it a lot along with the quote above. Good luck and best wishes always my dear friend. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless and take care always.
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Date: 1/24/2023 2:48:00 AM
I especially like the last stanza. I enjoyed reading your poetry contest entry this morning. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/24/2023 1:06:00 AM
Love this, Valsa, Your portrait of poetry, i deeply do feel. Harry.
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Date: 1/23/2023 8:52:00 PM
Exquisite poetry Valsa "Looking at this night, God’s artwork of sheer beauty, I feel heaven has descended down to Earth." How gloriously lovely!
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Valsa George
Date: 1/23/2023 9:14:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear BJ. Seeing the night sky on some late evenings, we cannot but think of God's artistry. On such moments anyone with some aesthetic sense will turn into a poet !
Date: 1/23/2023 7:57:00 PM
Dearest Valsa, your golden pen glorifies the beauty of "God's artwork" with sumptuous imagery and deep emotion. "As I hear this rhythm of Nature falling in my ears, / In every beat, I hear God’s kind of poetry recited." So beautiful! Your golden verses enrapture my heart's imagination with your tender and vibrant expression. The night has been portrayed with elegant majesty. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 1/23/2023 9:21:00 PM
Your humble heart touches mine, you deserve no less than all of it, my inspiring friend..
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Valsa George
Date: 1/23/2023 9:11:00 PM
Ashley, when you pour such lovely words on my simple poems, I feel thrilled. It is a pleasure reading your comments though I know I deserve just half of it. Thanks a lot sweet friend
Date: 1/23/2023 3:07:00 PM
You write well on the ethereal grace of dusk. Throughout the poem, Valsa, you employ beautiful imagery. Imagine there is no night, and tell me how we can sleep and rejuvenate our bodies.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/23/2023 5:57:00 PM
I am so glad that poets of your stature are there to encourage me. Thanks a lot, dear friend.
Date: 1/23/2023 1:22:00 PM
Your poem--wonderfully reminiscing in beauty of night. Great imagery throughout, Valsa. Best to you.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/23/2023 5:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay. With your ability to paint such scenes marvelously well, if you can appreciate mine, it is something great......
Date: 1/23/2023 10:22:00 AM
Love your line, "Looking at this night, God’s artwork of sheer beauty," Have a blessed day....................
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Valsa George
Date: 1/23/2023 5:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula... ! Each night is God's artwork.
Date: 1/23/2023 9:09:00 AM
God created the night for our joy. What a beautiful poem, Dear Valsa. Best for a win.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/23/2023 5:51:00 PM
Hi Victor, much gratitude for your sweet comment . Some nights are so beautiful....
Date: 1/23/2023 8:43:00 AM
This is lovely, Valsa - very much enjoyed it!
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Valsa George
Date: 1/23/2023 5:50:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Jeff. Glad for your visit and comment.

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