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Garden's Beauty

Its charm, its bloom A gift of spring breeze Disappears fast Something not oozing from heart Something borrowed doesn’t last

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/7/2014 1:22:00 AM

This is a beautiful powerful piece! Excellent write! Pandita

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/21/2015 3:53:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation of my Japanese Tanka Garden's Beauty. You are very kind. Love. -Mohammad

Hamida Yamin
Date: 1/21/2015 3:45:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation of my Tanka Garden's Beauty. You are very kind. Love. -Mohammad

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/16/2013 4:14:00 PM

You are so right. Thanks for sharing. ..... Licilla

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/21/2015 3:56:00 PM

Thanks for your educated comments, Lucilla. I am grateful.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/21/2015 3:56:00 PM

Thanks for your educated comments, Lucilla. I am grateful.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2013 7:38:00 AM

- Just want to say: - Have a nice day Mohammad - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/21/2015 4:00:00 PM

Sorry for this belated reply, Anne. Your comment was not communicated to me. I am reading it just today per chance. Thanks for visiting my Tanka and for your appreciation. Love. -Mohammad

Diana Mohammed

Date: 5/13/2013 11:30:00 PM

It sounds sad...Love Diana

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/21/2015 4:03:00 PM

It is sad, indeed, Diana Darling. Everything created must perish. Love. -Mohammad

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/15/2013 7:39:00 PM

Hi my friend, so nice to read this wonderful verse. the last line is priceless and certainly describes not only gardens but so many other fleeting things in our liives. Love, Lizzie

Hamida Yamin
Date: 1/21/2015 3:42:00 PM

Although belated, I wish to thank you for your uplifting comments. Love. -Mohammad