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Free To Roam

Turning sideways, once more I lay crouched in bed, Not compelled to wake up and run round the clock. The family, gone on a four-day adventurous trip. Left to myself, may I devour this calm with none to block. Listening to the hiss of falling rain, here I lie. The breeze that steals in through the window ajar, Tousles my hair and briskly passes. I hear a Bulbul warbling from a tree afar. Snuggling beneath my woolly blanket, With deadlines none, I feel so light. Lazily watching the sun beams filtering down, I lie quiet, my mind, like a bird in flight. This brief respite is truly a delight, At a time when life is going out of gear, With so much of work and very many errands, Task on task and each day’s toil and care. Now the house is empty with my own space, To pursue things of my preferential choice, To feast on the flowers in dawn’s early light, And to lose myself in the company of the Muse. To indolently watch the time slipping by, To indulge in all fanciful things that gladden, To skip a meal and close the kitchen down, To hum and sing in gay abandon. Loneliness, at times I warmly embrace, When exhausted with life’s ceaseless mess. Of late I have begun to realize, It sure has its shimmering gloss. * * * After a cool night’s blissful sleep and rest, I woke up a little late, feeling full of zest. Today, like a nomad, free to roam in places I love, And venture out on a day’s audacious quest! Jan. 2023 ~ Placed First~ Pick- a- Title, Vol.34. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Edward Ibeh

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Date: 1/31/2023 10:45:00 AM
Ah, yes, I can remember the bliss of being alone for a few hours--no children's noisy play, no demands. You said it beautifully, Valsa. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/30/2023 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/story. A peaceful time can be great. Have a blessed day/week..................
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Date: 1/30/2023 6:57:00 AM
Back with congratuations on your deserved win, Valsa your poetry is beautiful and well-written.
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Date: 1/28/2023 4:56:00 PM
Oh Valsa, a day without commitment, free to do one's own will. lt doesn't happen often, but it sure gives one a thrill. Your poem is delightful. You expressed just what its like when days like that happen.
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Date: 1/28/2023 12:54:00 PM
In addition to being really informative, this was also a lot of fun to read. As you so eloquently portray in your poetry, dear Valsa, there are moments when being on your own is calming and rejuvenating, preparing you to take on the excitement of a new day. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 1/28/2023 5:35:00 AM
Sometimes being alone is peaceful and refreshing--ready to take on the inspiration of another day--as you so wonderfully convey in this poem, Valsa.
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Date: 1/28/2023 4:27:00 AM
I hope you enjoyed every minute of your time doing so of what you wanted to do even though you still had to do those things you did not want to do. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/28/2023 3:59:00 AM
Delightful poem. Free to roam. Hope you had a peaceful time, dear Valsa. May you get a high rating in the contest.
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Date: 1/28/2023 2:12:00 AM
Well worded sentiments, reminding me of Wordsworth’s “The world is too much with us, late and soon, getting and spending, we lay waste our powers “. You express similar thoughts very eloquently. I hope you enjoyed your day of freedom.
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Date: 1/28/2023 1:32:00 AM
You can't beat those ME days, they don't come often so make the most of it Valsa. Just back from my travels again, hope you're keeping well. Tom
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