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Forgive Me or Forgive Me Not

Forgive me or forgive me not? A pretty pansy I’m undressing plucking off petals one by one as this simple question I’m addressing. Forgive me or forgive me not? One petal is left to go. Here’s the answer you now can know: Forgive me!

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Paige Hind

Date: 12/28/2024 4:50:00 PM

I hope they forgave you. An enjoyable read -

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/27/2024 5:11:00 PM

Andrea, so cute really and so optimistic too. You can elevate simple events and make them seem really special. Smiles!

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/27/2024 3:19:00 PM

She loves me!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/26/2024 12:13:00 AM

Hah i remember doing this when i was little! Haha but i used to do “ he loves me he loves me not” love your take! Simple and cute! Best wishes

Richard D Seal

Date: 12/24/2024 5:12:00 PM

I’d forgive you anything Petal, even tearing apart a flower in a game of chance in some lame attempt to prove yourself forgivable :) Merry Christmas

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/24/2024 10:48:00 PM

Haha I was just playing with this one. I would be in shock if it made the winner list

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/24/2024 12:00:00 PM

The blessing of gracious forgiveness is so well conveyed by this lovely poem. It artfully employs the fine analogy of the plucking of the petals of a pansy, to express the need. Nice work, Andrea.

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/24/2024 10:36:00 AM

When given the choice, I always choose levity before gravity -- more fun. Love it! Merry Christmas Andrea. Blessings.

John Read

Date: 12/24/2024 4:25:00 AM

I forgive you Andrea, wishing you and your loved ones a happy Christmas and a healthy new year God bless. xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/24/2024 1:15:00 AM

Naughty Andrea! Wonder what you did? Still you are forgiven. Happy festivities. Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/24/2024 10:30:00 AM

I don't even know. haha