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Flower Punch

daffodils' gold glow ingesting sun, a spring ode pierce winter shutters Haiku written: February 24, 2021 For Brian Strand July Contest

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/2/2021 8:21:00 PM

Brian, congrats on your wonderful win! Blessings, Kim M

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/2/2021 9:02:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate your thumbs up congratulations. Best wishes, Brian

Jan Allison

Date: 7/1/2021 12:48:00 AM

such a delightful image Brian, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/1/2021 6:33:00 AM

Thank you , Jan. Be well. Sincerely, Brian

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/20/2021 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I love daffodils. They are so pretty. Have a blessed day.......................

Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/20/2021 11:09:00 AM

Hi Paula, Thanks very much for your drop by + for commenting on my submission. Best wishes always, Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/3/2021 3:30:00 AM

Winter does make us feel shuttered. Enjoyed reading this ku. Congrats on this winner. Thanks for the visits. Sara

Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/3/2021 7:40:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. Kind of you to comment favorably on this small sumission. Sincerely, Brian

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/6/2021 12:46:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Brian ~

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/6/2021 1:09:00 PM

Hello Line, My appreciation for your note + for dropping by to read my submission. All the best, Brian

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/4/2021 5:09:00 AM

The power of the flower to take in sun and warm us!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/4/2021 7:02:00 AM

Hi Kim, Nothing like 'borrowing' a phrase from Hippie Days. Thank you for dropping by. Cheers Brian

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/4/2021 2:08:00 AM

Heya Brian I do hope them winter shutters stay closed, too early to say, although your daffodils are a good omen, well deserved winning placement cheers David

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/4/2021 7:05:00 AM

Hi David, I did see some Daffodil tops poke through a sun-draped garden. It is a good omen. Thank you for your kind note. Brian

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/3/2021 10:38:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/4/2021 7:00:00 AM

Hello Beata Thank you for your kind remarks. Hope all is well with you, Sincerely Brian

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/3/2021 7:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win ~ Mala

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/3/2021 7:41:00 PM

Thank you Mala. Our appreciation for a timely contest. Best wishes, Brian

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/25/2021 5:53:00 AM

When I think of spring daffodils pop up first so this resonated with me.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/25/2021 9:12:00 AM

Hello Caren, Hope you are well. Thanks very much for reading my submissions. Very kind of you to comment. Best wishes, Brian

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/24/2021 12:07:00 PM

Delightful, color filled picture carried by your alliteration Brian. Best of wishes for the contest! Love "ingesting sun!" Great image.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/24/2021 2:21:00 PM

Thank you Sam. You're the best. Hope all is well with you. Could be an early spring - we hope. Sincere good wishes, Brian