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Five Beautiful Lines

"Spring Is Coming Alive With My Five Senses." Quote By Poet I see the beautiful spring flowers blooming. I feel the new day's sun upon my face. I taste the fresh red juicy strawberries. I touch the soft brown baby bunny. I smell the rain after the day has been watered.

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Valsa George

Date: 3/20/2025 3:07:00 AM

Dear Paula, back to your sweet poem with congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2025 10:25:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read, write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Five Beautiful Lines" write again. Always good to see you here. Spring will be here soon, so enjoy it. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/15/2025 10:17:00 AM

"2 Place" Five Beautiful Lines~Date Written: 3/12/2025~written By Human Poet.....

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/15/2025 6:25:00 AM

Paula, it's easy to see what this is a winner! I loved it and the soft, fresh feeling that your words imparted! happy Saturday xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/15/2025 10:31:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you love my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. It was so much fun to bring to life. Happy Sunday To You... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2025 2:37:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/15/2025 10:29:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read, write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Spring is coming fast so enjoy it. Hugs... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/15/2025 2:35:00 AM

back to congratulate and meet brown bunny once again. congratulations on your win dear friend. cheers!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/15/2025 10:28:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read, write and for your Congratulations. Always great to see you here. I don't know about you but I have seen enough of this AI bunny. Be Gone Bunny.... Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write again. Have a great Sunday with cheers.... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 3/14/2025 8:40:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful Paula. A delightful read for me tonight. Bring on the spring! Big smiles & hugs~Anne :-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/15/2025 10:23:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, Absolutely beautiful. Spring is a beautiful time of the year and I love it. Hugs... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/14/2025 6:40:00 PM

beautiful lines, beautiful thoughts,I will be back to congratulate dear friend. happy writing.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/15/2025 10:22:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, beautiful lines, beautiful thoughts. It was fun to bring to life. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/14/2025 6:35:00 PM

Paula, your poem seems fascinating. A terrific idea that makes perfect sense.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/15/2025 10:20:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. I enjoyed writing this fun Spring write. Spring is coming fast so enjoy it... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

John Read

Date: 3/14/2025 1:50:00 PM

Hi Paula your poem sums up spring beautifully.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/15/2025 10:19:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Spring is coming fast so enjoy it... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/14/2025 7:07:00 AM

Great. Makes a lot of sense. Kind wishes, Kai

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 12:25:00 PM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, Great. It was fun to write. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

David Crandall

Date: 3/13/2025 5:50:00 PM

They all sound great, but my favorites are juicy strawberries in the sun!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 12:24:00 PM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Yes, juicy red strawberries are wonderful. I Love Them... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Hiba Junaid

Date: 3/13/2025 8:03:00 AM

This poem is just lovely. I could feel the tactile imagery with my own five senses. Very beautiful.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 12:22:00 PM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, Very beautiful. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/13/2025 7:23:00 AM

Dear Paula, I loved this delightful sensory journey through spring's beauty. You've created the sights, feelings, tastes, touches, and scents of the season in a way that feels both personal and universal. It's a joy to experience the world through your words. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 12:21:00 PM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you love my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Spring will be here soon with many new sights, feelings, tastes, touches, and scents to enjoy... Hooray!!! Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Len Gasun

Date: 3/13/2025 2:38:00 AM

A gorgeous 5 lined poem with such a beautiful image that satiates all my senses too my dear poet friend Paula. Very creative my dear poet friend. I love it and immensely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 12:02:00 PM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, Very creative. Also glad you love it. God bless you. Hugs.... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Valsa George

Date: 3/12/2025 9:53:00 PM

All five senses are satisfied. Lovely poem. Spring brings such beautiful experiences in life. All the best in the contest, dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:59:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read, write and for All the best in the contest. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be a, Lovely poem. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/12/2025 8:48:00 PM

What a pretty and uplifting read! CayCay

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:57:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, a pretty and uplifting read. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/12/2025 7:10:00 PM

Truly beautiful, Paula!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:56:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, Truly beautiful. Now I am wearing a smile. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/12/2025 7:06:00 PM

What a beautiful picture of Spring you’ve painted, Paula, enjoyed your five senses write

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:53:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Yes, words can paint a picture. You make me very happy saying, I did that for you. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Michael Tor

Date: 3/12/2025 5:20:00 PM

Love your five senses write Dear Paula. So enjoyed how you wrote this... God bless you...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:50:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you love my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Spring will be here soon. God bless you.... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/12/2025 4:48:00 PM

delicious poetry, i can feel alive and vibrating with your beautiful poem, thank you so much

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:48:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, delicious poetry. It was fun to bring to life. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2025 4:17:00 PM

Awesome idea. Using the five senses!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:45:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" write to be an, Awesome idea. It was fun to write. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/12/2025 3:29:00 PM

I love how you wrote this describing the senses. Happy Spring! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:44:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you love my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Yes, Happy Spring to you. Hugs... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/12/2025 1:04:00 PM

Wow! You bring is in touch with God’s creation in a very beautifully earthy fashion. Rain..my all time favorite Gracias, Pangie 10:30 a.m

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:42:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. I see WOW and FAV??? Thanks a million. You have made my day a very happy one. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/12/2025 12:15:00 PM

Sounds like a lovely day, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:38:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Yes, it was a lovely day to write this one. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/12/2025 11:44:00 AM

You use the five senses to display a beautiful poem. Best for a win. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2025 11:35:00 AM

Thanks for stopping to read, write and for Best for a win. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. I enjoyed writing this one. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........