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Fishy Tale

A pond sits in the glen bright fish dashing about casting silvery shadows ducks chasing after them eels making their way to sea flying birds circling back and forth green frogs croaking for a mate herons gobbling them up in the depths a pike floats jutting out its pointed head keeping hidden as it prowls lurking between the rotting logs minnows swim by unharmed in shoals newts eagerly snapping them up out in the reeds lays up a catfish playing dead it patiently waits quick to react to its prey reaping the bounties little fry snack sticklebacks swim lazily through reed beds trout leaping catching fly's and midgets under the calm waters life abounds vivid rainbow trout spawn while the blue waters thrive xanthine filled plants floating yellowfin cutthroat trout dart by and zander perch fill a fisherman's net

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Date: 1/3/2015 4:48:00 PM
Lovely imagery.
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Date: 1/3/2015 5:49:00 PM
ty Dylan hope you are having fun here. Try entering some of the contests but pay attention to the rules as they differ. Soup mail me if you need any help. hugs
Date: 8/18/2014 4:48:00 AM
words just flow smoothly, i love it :) vivid and captivating write
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Date: 8/17/2014 2:33:00 AM
Nice observation in to the Nature's depth and cultivated an excellent diamond like poem. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 8/16/2014 8:50:00 PM
I have been away, so this title caught my attention as I was traveling around Nova Scotia, thus the topic of fishing!!! Loved this one!
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Date: 8/13/2014 1:31:00 AM
love what you did with this style! Not easy to write...I did one a loooong time ago!nice~
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:08:00 PM
This was so good I forgot it was a abcdefghijklmnopqrwxyz
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:06:00 PM
This brought to mind Pike fishing in Northern Ontario.
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Date: 8/4/2014 5:55:00 PM
oh my, I finally noticed it was ABC poem. They are SO difficult to do as completely as you did yours. GREAT job.
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Date: 8/4/2014 4:36:00 PM
A wonderfully fishy ABC -beautifully crafted Shadow:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 8/4/2014 4:32:00 PM
I never imagined a pond so wonderful- the poem was so enjoyable-a lovely, imaginative write
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