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I ran across this form called "Fib" when looking for a form that used either 20 words or 20 syllables..It is an actual form but not listed on here..

Fib I Told him Lying game The lie expanded Now can not keep all those lies straight Sponsor: David Williams Contest: Twenty/Twenty Poetry form: Fib Written by: Sara Kendrick 20 syllables

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/9/2012 5:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Sara! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/7/2012 10:18:00 AM

SARA,,... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2012 7:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/6/2012 5:57:00 PM

Big congrats my dear Sara. Hugs Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2012 4:57:00 PM

congrats Sara on a lovely write and win in PD's contest of winning poems luv..

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/5/2012 8:51:00 PM

Congrats on your win, sara! You could not have written it better. One lie can spiral out of control. Blessings, Rhonda

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/3/2012 10:51:00 AM

Sol true what you say here, Sara-- yup how crazy one lie can be since it leads to such chaos. Super congrats on your super write! :D

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/3/2012 7:53:00 AM

Congrats, Sara. Excellent piece. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Gautami Phookan

Date: 3/3/2012 1:03:00 AM

There is absolute truth here about fibbing... a very good one. Congrats Sara on your fabulous win...love to you, gautami

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2012 11:41:00 PM

good one, drawing on that idea of spinning a web of deceit! congratulations, Sara.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 7:55:00 PM

SARA... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/2/2012 5:51:00 PM

Nice work,Sara.You presentation is unique..Congratulations on your win in David`s contest....

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 3/2/2012 4:16:00 PM

Sara, I loved this. That's why I don't lie, it is way too hard to keep things straight. Well done. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/2/2012 11:01:00 AM

I BIG reason why I chose not to lie! Congrad's Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2012 9:52:00 AM

so creative,sara.. best cheers to you on your smashing win!..:) hugggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2012 9:24:00 AM

congrats Sara on a super win for these wise lines of truth luv.. lies have short legs for sure luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 3/2/2012 6:32:00 AM

So very true Sara.Enjoyed.Congrats on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/2/2012 5:46:00 AM

Congratulations Sara xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 2/27/2012 12:28:00 PM

Yes, lies always snowball, don't they? My gran used to say, 'Liars always get found out.' Lovely fib poem : )

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/25/2012 8:51:00 PM

Oh, how I know this is true Sara! I've been caught in a lie a couple of times by the stories becoming entangled and showing my lie! It's always best to not tell the lie in the first place! That way you don't get into these messes! This is a wonderful poem that I read this evening! Great Work!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/25/2012 4:45:00 PM

Yep, tried to tell that to my children when they were fibbing. lol. I sure enjoyed this one. BG

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/25/2012 4:06:00 PM

I'm not sure I totally get this. i get the last line but i'm having trouble connecting it all. it is probably just me. anyway, I like how your sentence lengths expand like the lie :)