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Fate Cannot Wait

I'm quite sure that I won't be late To your home on our very first date You don't know me for sure But I have a great cure And a feeling that fate cannot wait

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 1/29/2024 4:19:00 PM
Sweet! Congratulations on second place!
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Date: 1/29/2024 1:57:00 PM
A smooth one. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/29/2024 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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Date: 1/29/2024 4:43:00 AM
Brilliantly penned, with a hint at things to come ... Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Craig.
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Date: 1/24/2024 6:40:00 AM
Your limericks are as brilliant as every other poem, i can see this is a pick up line, you clearly know what would intrigue them, especially when one says “ i know the cure” and also promising that you wont be late for the first date. Thats clever, loved the rhymes too in this. Best wishes if its for the contest
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Date: 1/23/2024 8:35:00 AM
- Great written ... sometimes we have to let fate decide ... good luck :) - hugs
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