Fabulous Fun Nursery Rhyme

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October 14, 2024

Alliteration Nursery Rhyme Contest

Sponsor: Eve Roper

Mary rushes to the market, To buy biscuit, bread, butter, Finds fabulous fare for Fluffy, Crochety cantankerous cat of her! Bobby loves leafing through books, Bubbles blows bothersome brother, Baby yells sky-rocketing loud, Daddy hugs and kisses her! Green grass growing gorgeous, Georgie gladly ready to mow, Dorothy demands dance costume, Mommy merrily decides to sew!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/7/2024 9:29:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Nursery Rhyme write again. Have a fun day writing away.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/4/2024 8:47:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun Nursery Rhyme write. Kids will enjoy it. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a fun day writing away....................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/28/2024 8:36:00 AM

I love this Nursery Rhyme Mala, a great fun for young ones. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2024 7:50:00 PM

Very cute alliterative rhyming, Mala.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/17/2024 8:48:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. You do very well in fun poems - I try.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/15/2024 9:47:00 AM

what a fun poem Malabika, i started one yesterday and limericks but i ditched the two limerick ideas and did a new one today - its the first time I've ever struggled with a limerick for a contest, hugs jan xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/15/2024 10:24:00 AM

I struggled a lot with the Alliteration! If you think it’s a fun poem, I am happy! You are the master of fun poems! Love ~