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Empyrean Perfumes Premiere Contest Winner

"We can't ever fathom, when the ceasing flicker of hope flutters away, and escapes to an endless forest; the only charm in this spellbound life is, to chase that scarred saffron second and hue it with our own enchanting light..." As the fiddling crescent basks in this reborn moonrise, I slowly blanket my soul with shivering sighs of frozen stars, as they trickle down my lungs and echo a scentless spring, where oceans yearn to feel the kiss of floral zephyrs, tickling their turquoise sirens. Perhaps, I was once a lifeless snowdrop, a stygian silhouette of midnight which wrapped those neon skies, as black ice melted in cores, when pain became my melancholic soulmate and no philosopher's stone could turn this solemn melody, into sapphire ruins of remedy. Since my spirit has hibernated in this crystal castle - I've been waltzing in a wondering, did my eyes loose their dazzle and become mere colourless dots of an oil pastel portrait, as this quill turned vengeful for its own spirit? Did I break my own heart, by watering the macabre of miracles? Fading in marigold mangroves that whisper to my delicate muse, I feel the breaths of mirthful wingbeats, ricocheting and making me swoon over a pedestal of pure sunrays. Have I always been this alive, where these pulses, reverberating in my chestnut skin, could wake me up from the crestfallen slumber? Now, as these topaz horizons unfold their golden carpet, embroidered with velvet peonies and silk carnations, I slowly bloom, with a princess-cloak of fluffy feathered petals, resting upon the crown of emerald leaves, bathed in chic chocolaty lakes, as, ~ an empyrean lotus. So, reminisce me evermore, as an imperfect lyric of a dusky peach pixie, leaving footprints of faith in a muddy reverie, for, on the bluebell crest of lush earth, reigns this rosy Cleopatra, rhyming with jeweled perfumes of tomorrow.

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Date: 1/15/2024 12:35:00 AM
Lovely poem
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Date: 1/14/2024 6:15:00 AM
My pleasure. Blessings Richard.
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Date: 1/12/2024 6:54:00 AM
I love the verse that begins: Perhaps, I was once a lifeless snowdrop… Have a lovely day, my friend!
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Date: 1/8/2024 2:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/7/2024 3:40:00 PM
Quite beautiful, Hiya. Congrats on your win! You are a wonderfully deep person.
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:10:00 AM
An outstanding poetry my dear poet friend. No wonder why it won a trophy. Big Congrats on you well-deserved trophy win! This is amazing. I'll come back at my free time and read again from you if you don't mind. Thanks a lot for sharing you exceptional talent. Thank you so much also for reading my simple poetry. May God bless you always and your writings. A very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2024 to you and your family.
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Date: 1/5/2024 4:47:00 PM
We luv ya Hiya. Nice poem and placement.
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Date: 1/5/2024 3:33:00 PM
Words fail me, dear Hiya. I found the entire poem utterly enchanting, especially the final verse. I am delighted to have this in my faves. :)
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:37:00 PM
Oh, Hiya, I can't express how excited I am for your trophy win! Since you have come to the soup, you've inspired so many I can tell, myself as well. I can just imagine in a couple of years, I know you're going far, a star poetess! To have Ink and SO as mentors has been such delightful witnessing. SO has taught me so much; his analyzing and breaking down my poems, the best comments one can get! Poets pay for reads! Hi Mystic Rose, you put a smile on my face...
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Date: 1/5/2024 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Hiya.. Well done. You and ink are so similar that whenever your place, its like she has placed.. I can see how inspired you are by her words..
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Date: 1/5/2024 3:36:00 AM
Where in Gods name did you come from Hiya? your words are like angel wings pinned to heavens door, I so love it. I'd F, F A V * IN CAPITALS :)
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Date: 1/5/2024 2:24:00 AM
Such an exquisite write from your talented ink dear little sweet poetess. From the comments below, I understand this has won trophy too. Congratulations Hiya. Thank you for your visit to my page and sorry for always being late to give my return comments...Hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 1/5/2024 2:08:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your trophy win: keep shining always angelic star
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Date: 1/4/2024 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful poem
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Date: 1/4/2024 1:04:00 PM
"Perhaps, I was once a lifeless snowdrop, a stygian silhouette of midnight which wrapped those neon skies, as black ice melted in cores" -- Superb imagery. Very beautiful. The many journey's of spiritual expression, several different manifestations at the same time...and somehow...they are all united...all God...all us...all one. Absolutely outstanding poetry!
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Date: 1/4/2024 12:05:00 PM
A beautiful poem that sends me hope for another day, another Spring. Thank you for your impactful, serene poems.
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Date: 1/4/2024 9:26:00 AM
Great original poetry, with wonderful imagery. One reads again I'm sure.
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Date: 1/4/2024 8:52:00 AM
Wonderful write, Hiya. The color and feelings in your work is like looking at a painting. Many blessings
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Date: 1/4/2024 2:26:00 AM
WOW! You write so beautiful, Hiya. Another stunning write from your wonderful golden pen. Love this! Happy New Year.. wishing you the best! Charlie
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Date: 1/3/2024 10:55:00 PM
The skill of a writer whose use of the quill, is beyond measure. Highly exceptional which is duly noted as a Fave. How well knitted its trailing words, each accustomed in balance, where one pulls the other to a wondrous impact of scattered brilliance. Bravo, my friend. Aloha, William
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Date: 1/3/2024 10:50:00 PM
"the only charm in this spellbound life is, to chase that scarred saffron second and hue it with our own enchanting light..." What a wonderful opening and what a stunning closing when you became a rosy Cleopatra "rhyming with jeweled perfumes of tomorrow. " From the stygian silhouette of midnight, you have emerged as an empyrean lotus! What powerful metaphors and what beautiful language! Hiya, you are a sparkling gem....
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Date: 1/3/2024 9:41:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Meanwhile, I greet you with a Joyous New Year with this prayer from the Bible in Numbers 6:24-26, "The Lord bless thee, and keep thee: The Lord make his face shine upon thee, and be gracious unto thee: The Lord lift up his countenance upon thee, and give thee peace."
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Date: 1/3/2024 1:06:00 PM
Everything you write is a stunning masterpiece, Hiya. Splendor of your vocabulary shines in metaphoric descriptions.--Now, as these topaz horizons unfold their golden carpet, embroidered with velvet peonies and silk carnations-- for, on the bluebell crest of lush earth, reigns this rosy Cleopatra, rhyming with jeweled perfumes of tomorrow--WOW! A FAVE!!
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Date: 1/3/2024 12:35:00 PM
Dear Hiya, how do you think of such descriptions.. Your poem is a captivating journey through self-exploration, adorned with eloquent language, vivid imagery, and profound introspection. Your verses skilfully navigate the complexities of emotions, leaving a lasting impression on the reader's heart and mind... The overarching theme of transformation and renewal is palpable throughout the poem.. I like how you explore the idea of overcoming darkness and blossoming into a new existence,
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Date: 1/3/2024 12:35:00 PM
symbolized by the imagery of blooming flowers, golden horizons, and a "princess-cloak of fluffy feathered petals." Not sure if it is for a contest, but you wrote it very well young lady..
Date: 1/3/2024 11:22:00 AM
I hope the melancholic pain has left with the old year going out. Thanks for sharing these creative lines with us and visiting my pages. Sara K
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