Elegy For a Duchess

Who would believe your slim elegant body would win my affection, 
when you gracelessly step on toes? Your soft doe skin of cream 

spotted brown, floppy ears I threaten to turn into gloves as a joke.
Through many chain jangle calls for walks where you race and lunge 

and bark fighting for the right to be with me, how could I turn you away?
When you almost die I am ready to give you away to death, hating the sick 

green puke, you become skinnier despite the surgery until finally
one simple shot brings you back to us alive, slurping our hands and faces. 

Busy days of science and humanities and government tucked up in a chair, 
I forgot you, but you begged let me even eat your apple. let me sit in your lap 

but you’re so big now you don’t fit and don't like apple. Chocolate chips cookies, though, a whole batch scarfed from the table and then you wiggle and wag tail,

snarl, your teeth clenched when I offer just one more. We all know who is guilty,
not you, your innocence, your steadfast defense, says it is our family who has forgot. 

Finally, it is too late. You hurt too bad, spine enflamed, barely able to walk
or eat. Tomorrow your last day. I pick up the chain, you race happy to join me

down the row of maples losing their last autumn leaves, where my brother and I lead  you plodding like an old man, stopping to breathe, and I see stars in my eyes, 

saying goodbye. Goodbye to the lady of our family, the Dalmatian Duchess 
who loved us best, walked beside us through our childhood days like a guardian.

11-16-2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 12/3/2013 7:42:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Sheri
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Date: 12/3/2013 5:56:00 PM
I remember seeing this one before and thinking what a great job you did writing of it. CONGRATS. WEll deserved.
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:36:00 PM
Boy that was a rough ride SO sad, we love our pets so, it's just awful when we must let them go. Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
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Date: 11/17/2013 9:37:00 AM
You misted my eyes on this excellent write of yours my dear friend Sheri. A real beautiful and so touching piece. Thank you so much for sharing! I've written an elegy poem also but I might post it later. Good luck in the contest! Thank you so much as well for inspiring congratulatory comments on my diamante poem. I'm so happy and honored that you enjoyed. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/17/2013 1:44:00 AM
this is SO touching. A sure winner and beautifully sad. I remember when our dear cat got cancer and took nearly a year to die. It was so sad when she yowled sometimes in pain. That is when we decided to have her put to sleep.
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Date: 11/16/2013 9:21:00 PM
Impressive elegiac expressions on Dalmatian Duchess and lovely personification, Sheri
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Date: 11/16/2013 3:49:00 PM
Ahh!! Sad..Enjoyed reading this one for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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