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Eden

Eden Early bloom the yellows of spring, ending the gray of winter’s bane; entwined vines of columbines cling, enthralled by silver drops of rain. Enrobed in colors fresh and green, ensconced in nature’s arms serene… Eden hums as nightingales sing. 06-06-2018 Contest: Pleiades Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Placement: 2nd

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Fj Thomas

Date: 7/10/2018 2:40:00 PM

Visually stirring and stunning Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/10/2018 4:17:00 PM

Hi FJ, it is a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you for your wonderful compliments which means so much to me. Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/24/2018 8:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful Pleiades. Well done!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/24/2018 9:15:00 PM

Hi Susan, I am happy to receive your wonderful compliments. Thanks very much for your supportive words! Hugs. Pandita

Roy Pett

Date: 6/24/2018 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Pandita, beautifully written Pleiades a joy to read. :))

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/24/2018 10:13:00 AM

Hi Roy, it is a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you for your continued encouragement which means so much to me. Best wishes and hugs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2018 4:26:00 PM

wow, this one for imagery is one of my favorites. SO NICE. Congrats for your win, Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/22/2018 5:02:00 PM

Hi Andie, thank you so much my friend for your congratulatory words! Have a beautiful weekend! Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 6/22/2018 4:17:00 PM

Beautiful write Pandita..Congrats on your win..

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/22/2018 5:01:00 PM

Hi Joseph, I am so honored! Thank you very much for your lovely compliment and including this piece on your list of winners! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/15/2018 10:04:00 PM

Like a flower in bloom. Your words hold beauty. The fragrance is so sweet. Such a delight to read. ~ Maia

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/16/2018 5:26:00 PM

Hi Maia, it is a pleasure to receive your wonderful compliments. Thanks very much for your supportive words! Hugs. Pandita

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/11/2018 11:33:00 AM

Beautifully depicted Pandita...a win is coming your way...love 7 light...^WW^

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/11/2018 12:26:00 PM

Hi WW, it is a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you for your continued encouragement which means so much to me. Best wishes and hugs.

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/10/2018 11:49:00 AM

Your words are as fresh as spring Pandita, well done...

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/10/2018 9:36:00 PM

Hi Charlie, I appreciate your lovely compliments. Thank you, my friend, for your support and encouragement! Hugs. Pandita

Fauxcroft Wade

Date: 6/8/2018 5:57:00 AM

I love the graceful flow and beautiful images conjured up in this. Faux

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/8/2018 10:53:00 AM

Hey Faux, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you so much for your lovely compliments! hugs and best regards. Pandita

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/8/2018 5:56:00 AM

Wow you weave an amazing picture, with this beautiful poem.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/8/2018 10:49:00 AM

Harry, you have brightened my day with your wonderful compliments! Hope you will have a most enjoyable weekend, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/8/2018 12:39:00 AM

A Wonderful capture of a heavenly image! I can hear the music you composed genuinely with your pen dear Pandita.. A great joy to read.. Shine and stay blessed.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/8/2018 10:44:00 AM

My dearest Besma, how I appreciate your lovely comments and compliments! Thank you, my friend! Have a blessed and joyful weekend! Pandita