Earth Spun Around

day asked her to dance night agreed to stick around but earth spun around. September 3, 2017

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Joseph May

Date: 11/6/2023 5:56:00 AM

Earth does its own swirls, Very nice haiku Vijay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2017 2:52:00 PM

Very clever work..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 3:14:00 PM

Thank you Sara--appreciate your feedback!

Roy Pett

Date: 9/4/2017 5:38:00 AM

Love this Haiku Vijay, a joy to read. :))

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2017 6:36:00 AM

Many thanks for your lovely feedback, Roy!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/4/2017 2:08:00 AM

- Great haiku, Vijay - Well done - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :9

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2017 6:34:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely comments Anne-Lise!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2017 4:57:00 PM

this is SO cute, Vijay!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/3/2017 5:05:00 PM

Happy with your comments--so lovely that the message gets through! I was wondering at first if it would be clear enough that earth's spin would mean night became day--so she couldn't stick around. Many thanks, Andrea!