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UNTIL FOREVER Oh, d e a t h sad end- with DEEP sorrow I weep. My tears endless- F A L L I N G always farewell. My LOVE- mom, dad, grandma sister b a b y . R e p o s e in peace U N T I L I come to you. _________________ December 7, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Duplex Copyright Protected, ID 16-855-941-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Depth sponsor, Jan Allison First Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2016 8:47:00 PM

big congrats, Constance. I wish I had time to check emails and stuff but I have dang housework and dinner and it's so late. Hope you had a nice day. Mine was pretty nice.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/11/2016 5:02:00 AM

Hi BW, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Darren White

Date: 12/10/2016 11:58:00 PM

I congratulate you on your win. It has melancholy and yearning. And the form accentuates it.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/10/2016 7:55:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Constance, with this sad and beautiful poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2016 6:33:00 PM

Many congrats on your top spot Constance :-) I did wonder if this one was yours as it has your trademark melancholy style:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/10/2016 12:14:00 PM

They are all part of you. You have DNA shared with all of them. That is our essence. I feel very lucky that I am able to read this deep and beautiful set of words so I am very thankful you are still with us. That time will come as it comes to us all.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/9/2016 12:13:00 AM

This is one of the best, Constance:) a winner in my eyes:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2016 6:53:00 PM

wow, I knew you would create an awesome one with this form and theme. So good, Constance.

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/7/2016 11:12:00 PM

A great write, Broken Wings, but so sad, ache flying through the void.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/7/2016 12:14:00 PM

WoW! BW, you did well with this form. It is deep and dark but well written. I could feel a deep sadness in each line. You have a style that's very much your own, I see it throughout this piece. It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven-Alexis