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Drunk Sue, leapt onto the ironing board, In great vigour swinging both her hands wide. As on a big stage Forgetting her age, Danced in thrill, fell off, hitting her head hard July.16.2022 Syllables- 10, 10, 5, 5, 10 (HMS) Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsored by- Lisa YY

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Date: 7/21/2022 2:34:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Valsa. Looks like she was have the time of her life. Bill
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Date: 7/20/2022 7:04:00 AM
Drunk Sue is great. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/19/2022 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Drunken Dance" is a fun Limerick write. Maybe more ironing and less drinking will work here. Today, be blessed as you are writing away.................
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Date: 7/17/2022 12:52:00 AM
She's certainly enjoying life to the full dispite the headache lol. Tom
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Date: 7/16/2022 7:06:00 PM
Luckily, she had a, "I've fallen and I can get up" button? Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 7/16/2022 5:07:00 PM
It looks like she's having such a great time! Your photo and writing are both really emotive and lovely, Valsa. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 7/16/2022 8:48:00 AM
Wow. Best go to ER and check her head.
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Date: 7/16/2022 7:21:00 AM
LOL!
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Date: 7/16/2022 7:15:00 AM
She's having a good time! Lovely expressive write, as is your photo, Valsa.
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Date: 7/16/2022 6:36:00 AM
Hope the Humpty Dumpty Hospital put Sue together again. Shalom shalom Sis Valsa G.
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Date: 7/16/2022 12:44:00 AM
Good one!
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Valsa George
Date: 7/16/2022 4:10:00 AM
Thank you dear friend !

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