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Dreamer, Awaken!

This life we're living Dreaming of a dream come true Is only a dream

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2010 7:54:00 PM

So many have written about life as a dream. and here in this senryu, you do an admirable job of it too! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2010 7:15:00 PM

But what a beautiful dream life is Linda .. and so much to enjoy if we keep a positive attitude .... a beautiful and thought provoking Senryu tonight I have enjoyed reading.. and thankxxx for helping my friend, Colleen Bono, leading her to read the poem u suggested to help her with her depression.. Colleen has a brand new grandchild .. we pray for her all the time.. thankxxx Linda ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Colleen Bono

Date: 3/11/2010 6:40:00 PM

Exactly,It is only a dream.The dreams I have are of death because that is what I am always thinking about.I can't fight anymore.It's time to give into my feelings.I hope you understand.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2010 12:55:00 PM

We all need to awaken to reality don't we..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/4/2010 4:13:00 PM

Very nicely written Haiku, Linda. Flows so smoothly does it not? I believe it wants and needs to keep going ...it seems too good to stop just yet? sounds a little like Plato to a point....very nice/ Thank you so much for your comments. I appreciate them. Robert

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 3/4/2010 7:10:00 AM

I’m am so pleased that you shared your thoughts with us today.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 6:58:00 AM

And in some cases, it's becoming a nightmare for many these days! I hope we can awaken and find truth! LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 10:32:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Linda. Looking forward to reading more of your writing. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2010 6:31:00 PM

Nice Haiku Linda but I like to think it might come true if we dream hard enough.. this is a great thought ... hope u entered it in the new contest.. good luck if so..enjoyed..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/2/2010 6:24:00 PM

The supreme creator is real, everything else is a dream.

Skat A

Date: 3/2/2010 5:10:00 PM

YES the way I want to see the world. Likea dream...Enjoyed reading